Argonath RPG Police Department

GTA: San Andreas => SA:MP Application Desk => SAPD Information Center => Rejected Applications => Topic started by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 03, 2010, 18:37:11 pm

Title: SAPD: MiracleAlterlis[NPS]
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 03, 2010, 18:37:11 pm
Ingame Nickname AND Character Name (warning, see point #9 of application rules): MiracleAlterlis[NPS] / Corey Alterlis
Real-Life Age AND Ingame Age: 12 / 22
How long have you played on Argonath RPG: Almost year
How long have you played as a cop: 98% Police, 1% ARFD, 1% USAA
Are you a United States of Argonath Citizen (do you have a passport)?: Yes
Do you have a driver's license (issued by driving school)?: Yes, issued by AlterlisĀ® Driving School (Given by Traser)
Have you read all "SAPD Police Procedures" topics? Yes
Are you able to use TeamSpeak (no microphone needed): Yes
Have you been an SAPD member before? (cadet or above): Yes
If yes, explain your previous rank in SAPD, did you resign, rejected or fired? Officer, fired
Had an previous application that go rejected? (add link to old application): http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=9120.0
Why do you want to join San Andreas Police Department (minimum of 3 sentence): I want to improve my skill and expierence by getting higher rank and better training, get into serious situations such as 207 or/and 211, bomb threat, homicide, investigate the crime case, solve them, find and arrest possible suspect or criminal, save the victim/withness for the court of law, help improve the street to be crimeless, clean, and safe. Protect VIP/Civilian/etc. Serving the citizen and other, assist with EMS/Rescue Team/Coast Guard/And other law enforcement or legalize organizations.
Support in radio communication, Dispatching, Operating, Leading some situation if there is no higher ranked in the situation (Online), I'm best at driving, good at shooting, great at evading bullets, best in chase pursuit high speed/non-high speed/PIT, lag ram, blocking, road block, etc. And also keeping the traffic rules by giving fine from traffic rules breaker, warn them, aid them, teach them how to use traffic correctly, how to park, where to drive/park, where to speed/where not, etc.

I have expierence (Or you can call it "Skill") in investigating/detective stuffs. Escorting or protecting person.
I have great abilities of leading, taking control, yes and also following order. I can plan/secure the situation for the safety of victim/other's lifes. Not a money-cop, or so called abuser. Money is not my problem, I don't care about money, I don't need it, only I need is "Law & Order"

Previous group: San Andreas Sheriff Division (http://www.sasdivision.com), Argonath Army (Ronn)
Current group: AlterlisĀ® Law Family & Legal Corporation Co., Ltd. (http://www.alterliscorporation.co.cc), United States Argonath Army (Salmonella, Caion), San Andreas Coast Guard ([TCL]JaMeS), Secret Service (=AV=Dave), Argonath RPG Fire Department (http://arfd.argonathrpg.com), etc.

I think it's enough for my description
Thanks for reading.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Giovanni_Blake on May 03, 2010, 18:42:17 pm
Good luck!
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Plam Knight on May 03, 2010, 18:43:17 pm
You have pretty nice application there.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Julian_Garver on May 08, 2010, 13:08:19 pm
This applicant is NOT RECOMMENDED he was beating on a suspect that was standing crouched (/hide cmd) with his nitestick and did not tell her to give up. I was there when he suspected her seeing as she was clearly minding her own this leads me to beleive this applicant is corrupt.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 08, 2010, 15:09:42 pm
mhm...

You late-arrived on scene
The suspect Assault civilian multiple times, and did not afraid of civilian's hurt or other damages.
When the suspect got /su'ed, then she turned herself down, by doing /hide, and screaming out loud?
And moaning about her ankles are broking? But why didn't she care about civilian's ankle when she assaulted him, this applies the same to her, the suspect.

I did not just constantly hitting her on ground with nightstick
And you know what, I did shout Hands Up, Freeze, Now, surrender at once, multiple times...
And you arrived, and tell me to stop, and make a decided on your own that I was being corrupted moneycop?

No trolling here please.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Julian_Garver on May 08, 2010, 15:31:08 pm
mhm...

You late-arrived on scene
The suspect Assault civilian multiple times, and did not afraid of civilian's hurt or other damages.
When the suspect got /su'ed, then she turned herself down, by doing /hide, and screaming out loud?
And moaning about her ankles are broking? But why didn't she care about civilian's ankle when she assaulted him, this applies the same to her, the suspect.

I did not just constantly hitting her on ground with nightstick
And you know what, I did shout Hands Up, Freeze, Now, surrender at once, multiple times...
And you arrived, and tell me to stop, and make a decided on your own that I was being corrupted moneycop?

No trolling here please.
I was there and KNOW what I saw and seriusly dont accuse people of trolling.and I will stand by my statement
also a witness of me being on scene before and after you suspected is [SASD]L_Lawless and he treated the civil and the suspects broken anckle.
and I did not accuse you of being a money cop...and I will not say something of the like unless you prove to be one.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Kent on May 08, 2010, 23:54:50 pm
Sorry to say, but I don't recommended you  :(
You are abusing *sometimes* your powers, and you shoot unarmed suspects WITH a M4, thats not good...
Even if you kill him faster..  :app:
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: J. Prilo on May 09, 2010, 00:17:29 am
Good cop, I wish you good luck!
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 09, 2010, 08:00:31 am
Some people might think I'm abusing sometimes
But what you see is not what you understand
All I do is follow the procedures and use common sense to handle with certain situation
For example as IRL, you would moaning "abuse" or "police butuality", but the LEO actually did nothing wrong. But you just see by your own oponion that it is unfair advantage or abuse, etc.

Everyone, please understand that, I obey IRL law+ARPD Procedures, and RPing it, as good as I can.

Thanks.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Sushi on May 09, 2010, 09:14:37 am
I really hope you do not shoot unarmed suspects with M4. I shall withhold my opinion and recommendation under further observations.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: TeaM_Francis on May 09, 2010, 16:01:57 pm
Not recommended :
- Refusing to give an investigation
- Abusing cop rights to /su directly without asking.
- Jailing quickly when asked for an investigation
- Keeps on moaning on how Cops drive / shoot
Improve those and you'll get a good reputation
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 09, 2010, 16:05:50 pm
Not recommended :
- Refusing to give an investigation
- Abusing cop rights to /su directly without asking.
- Jailing quickly when asked for an investigation
- Keeps on moaning on how Cops drive / shoot
Improve those and you'll get a good reputation

- I did not refuse, I did investigate, and you don't proud on the result, so you call 911 about "abuse officer refuse to investigate", and Leonardo solve the problem.
- I /su too fast, I type fast, my apologize, but I did not abuse, because I /su what I see.
- I didn't even jail you yet.
- I didn't even moan about anything how cops drive/shoot. I only tell them to drive carefully on public chat, and not to the cop.

Do NOT give false information when you are yourself a suspect.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: TeaM_Francis on May 10, 2010, 04:44:36 am
Lol at first "-". All you did was Tell me "You assaulted a dying civilian, you will be jailed" then did the /mir. How is that an investigation, Seriously? Is that the way you'll investigate whenever you reach a rank that is deserving?
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 10, 2010, 06:12:45 am
Assaulted dying suspect is simply Manslaughter...
And your case is already dropped since Leonardo investgated the whole situation.
It was a misunderstand

It was my false to /su you too fast
What I saw that time is not one hit, it maybe a desync or a lag.
It just a misunderstanding and lack of evidence
Both of us doesn't have evidence or witness.

I was arresteing you for Murder...
I did investigate, what about the Questions I asked you? That's not investigation?
But, if you want to discuss about this, please continue to PM.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Jeffrey_Dahmer on May 10, 2010, 08:10:39 am
NOT RECOMMENDED. me and my friend are new to the PD occupation and i made a misstake when i radio in a C30 that i handled and then i did c4 C14 in the same message... he cut me of by my ankles cause he was pissed, i asked for exuse that it was wrong and i told him im new. Didnt mather cause i could go and learn how to be a f**king cop. Some ScreenShoots exists, people tell me hes a regular, a regular should know how to adjust a newbie when there doing wrong, not making them never wanna go back to PD again!

Dont know why but i have always seen this cop as a good professional cop, this really changed my vision of him =!
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 11, 2010, 08:56:00 am
- I was not pissed.
- I was only saying that, You do not have to report 3 codes at the same time.
- I was teaching you, because you are new, I didn't do it in harasment or sarcasm, or pissed, or w/e.
- But when you argue with what I said, I pissed, because you are new, and you argue with old police who know police-related IRL...
- The case is already over, Sarah made us done argueing this.
- Why you continue to argue in my application.
- I though we already "peace", and yes you said it.

Thanks you
No bad comments please.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Julian_Garver on May 11, 2010, 16:13:54 pm
Quate from Corey Alterlis : No bad comments please.

well if we do not put bad comments we can not put good so without one you can not have the other....we are trying to give the SAPD a clear veiw of their applicant,good or bad they need to know it all.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 11, 2010, 16:37:20 pm
By "no bad comment", I meant

Don't say something bad that you are misunderstanding or it's just a mistaken of someone.
In Jeffrey's case, it is completely misunderstanding as you can see. No one was pissing, no one was being "boss" of someone, it is simply "telling"...
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Alan Demarest on May 12, 2010, 14:08:45 pm
Shooting a still standing suspect.

Not recommended.

1. You suspected me for speeding / Evading. You did not ask me to stop.

2. You opened fire on my car. You never asked me to stop or pull over.

3. You shot me while I was standing still and trying to talk to you.

And again, NOT recommended.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 12, 2010, 15:41:55 pm
Got a prove for that?
I don't remembering any suspect I shot down while standing still

I always turn on LIGHTS and SIREN when chasing or pulling over anyone
I always use megaphone when pulling over anyone
I always report on radio before chasing anyone
I always asked to Freeze, and Hands up, before shooting anyone

Thanks for false commenting.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Plam Knight on May 12, 2010, 16:09:48 pm
Alright Corey I have only one question:Why there are 3-4 people not recommending you and not even one recommending you and you keep making up some kind of excuses ?

I know that you was ex Senior Officer but from what I see from all this posts you are not cabable of doing that job anymore.

Signed By Academy Instructor Plam Knight
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Alan Demarest on May 12, 2010, 16:31:49 pm
Because it was ME.

SAPD Academy Instructor Luca Leone.

Edit: You didn't kill me, but you shot me. You suspected me without telling me to pull over. If it didn't appear on my screen, then YOU have to get closer and do it again.

When did I say shit about the radio?
You told me to stop or you will use force. I stopped. You still shot me.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 12, 2010, 16:49:18 pm
Luca, Give me screenshots, post it here, then I maybe can describe all what really happened.
I don't want to say anymore without proof, because people will think I excuses.

@Plam, I was Officer, yes.
3-4 people not recommending me, because they claimed they are "abused" while they are suspect.
a.k.a. "moan", to be honest. I never abuse/moneyhunt/etc. Ask other Officers, or even ask Lieutenant Hank, Sergeant Rory, or other Sergeant+

Why they see me as good cops?
Why other see me as abuser?

Is that because lack of knowledge in law/procedures?

-Thanks for all the comments.
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Plam Knight on May 12, 2010, 16:57:02 pm
Luca, Give me screenshots, post it here, then I maybe can describe all what really happened.
I don't want to say anymore without proof, because people will think I excuses.

@Plam, I was Officer, yes.
3-4 people not recommending me, because they claimed they are "abused" while they are suspect.
a.k.a. "moan", to be honest. I never abuse/moneyhunt/etc. Ask other Officers, or even ask Lieutenant Hank, Sergeant Rory, or other Sergeant+

Why they see me as good cops?
Why other see me as abuser?

Is that because lack of knowledge in law/procedures?

-Thanks for all the comments.

Anyways I was just asking I can't say recommended or not recommended without doing patrol with you.
So I would like to have patrol with you sometimes in the next days.

Edit: Alright I have heard also Miracle side and I belive in some of the cases its not only his fault and also in Gage's is not his fault at all.
1. Gage's case - The girl at GS9 was DMing one of i9 and when Miracle got her she forced RP.
2. About Luca's case - Yes he has forgoten the megaphone and even if you didn't saw his lighs and heard his sirena you should have stopen after he /SUed you and you should have explained him after all thats our job.
3. About Jeffrey's case - You know Miracle had some right in his words,when you reported code 30 you shouldn't have mixed it with code 4,just report code 30 and right away after that code 10-22 for code 30.

Signed By Academy Instructor Plam Knight
Title: Re: SAPD: Miracle_Alterlis
Post by: Lionel Valdes on May 12, 2010, 19:53:18 pm
Miracle fix your name on the title,I saw you In-game with different name (NPS Tag etc..)
Title: Re: SAPD: MiracleAlterlis[NPS]
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 12, 2010, 22:11:35 pm
Thanks to Plam and Arnold.  ;)
Title: Re: SAPD: MiracleAlterlis[NPS]
Post by: Kent on May 14, 2010, 11:29:42 am
NOT recommended!

- Abusing /su
- Didn't ask me for /gu, but hands up (/hail 1). I did, he still hitted me.
- Shooting at suspects which are armed with SprayCan...
- Don't give warnings, but sus immediatly
Title: Re: SAPD: MiracleAlterlis[NPS]
Post by: Daco on May 14, 2010, 14:16:21 pm
This individual tends to abuse his powers and deceive people, I would not recommend accepting him.
Title: Re: SAPD: MiracleAlterlis[NPS]
Post by: Cruel Cooking Chef Curry Alterlis on May 14, 2010, 14:32:29 pm
- All /su are valid, never been Invalid nor get unsus'ed by admins or Sgt.+ or FBI.
- Isn't that how police should do? Asking to hands up? Do I have to say "Type /gu!!!", that's non-RP sir.
- In that case the "armed" suspect sprayed me to death, I jumped out and shoot. "When officer in direct danger"
- Why I have to warn before /su...? So if someone shot? I have to warn them? "Hey, please don't kill civilian next time, I gave you warning"

...
Title: Re: SAPD: MiracleAlterlis[NPS]
Post by: Lionel Valdes on May 14, 2010, 22:13:01 pm
NOT recommended!

- Abusing /su
- Didn't ask me for /gu, but hands up (/hail 1). I did, he still hitted me.
- Shooting at suspects which are armed with SprayCan...
- Don't give warnings, but sus immediatly
if you do /hail 1 THEN /gu it will be a good RP :cop:
Title: Re: SAPD: MiracleAlterlis[NPS]
Post by: [Rstar]Vince on May 18, 2010, 01:50:10 am
Rejecteddue to unsuitability:


Change your attitude while working on police duty towards suspects.
Concentrate more on teamwork with fellow officers and PD members instead of arguing with them.

We understand you are a good roleplayer, but please do not forget that along with the ability to roleplay, you must be able to work as a team and treat everyone fair - including criminals.
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