Argonath RPG Police Department

GTA: San Andreas => SA:MP Application Desk => SAPD Information Center => Rejected Applications => Topic started by: Coley on July 29, 2010, 03:30:03 am

Title: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 29, 2010, 03:30:03 am
Ingame Nickname AND Character Name (warning, see point #9 of application rules): Coley_B. | Coley Brantley
Real-Life Age AND Ingame Age: 16 | 26
How long have you played on Argonath RPG: About three -four months on my account now.
How long have you played as a cop: All of the time I have been on the server.
Are you a United States of Argonath Citizen (do you have a passport)?: Yes
Do you have a driver's license (issued by driving school)?: Yes
Have you read all "SAPD Police Procedures" topics? YES
Have you been an SAPD member before? (cadet or above): No
If yes, explain your previous rank in SAPD, did you resign, rejected or fired? No
Had an previous application that go rejected? (add link to old application): Yes, http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/index.php?option=com_smf&Itemid=34&topic=10996.0, http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/index.php?option=com_smf&Itemid=34&topic=10435.0. In reference the my last rejection, I have truly changed. I have talked to SAPD command staff, and used there criticism to change my attitude, I learn what /q is, and I have not "lost my cool", since I got rejected. I have truly worked hard on it, and really tried to change it. I hope SAPD sees it that way, and sees I have changed it, and still trying to change it. I have found the cause of my attitude and fixed why I had my attitude, I have found the base of it, and figured why it was so bad, and getting worse. I hope you see it this way and, I PM'ed all of the Lt's+, on my situation of my attitude, and wrote an apology letter. I apologize to everyone, now, everyone in SAPD, I hope you forgive me for my terrible attitude and let me be in your team.
Why do you want to join San Andreas Police Department (minimum of 3 sentence):
I am dedicated to police work and SAPD. I love to help people and help the community. I support all cop work. I have always wanted to be apart of this department, since I started. It means a lot to be in this department. It shows people you are actually dedicated to this job and want to help on crime prevention. I would be a great addition to this department and would be do my best to further myself, along with the department. I want to do everything, I can possibly do, to get to the top, in police work. This is an elite department, and I would love to get in it. I enjoy all the members of this department, a lot of them are my friends. I have waited along time and I will wait forever, as long as I can get in this department.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: [Rstar]Vince on July 29, 2010, 03:31:13 am
Now this is the Coley that I met when you first joined. :)
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 29, 2010, 03:40:48 am
Now this is the Coley that I met when you first joined. :)

Thanks Chief. I have no excuses, just answers, for my previous mistakes. But that is what command staff is for, to help you through mistakes and hard times. I have become dedicated to SAPD/ARPD, I am now actually active on the forums, and actually putting effort towards this. I have re-evaluated what my status is a person, and validated my attitude towards people. I have learned a lot about myself because of SAPD, and I am ready to be apart of it. I will be talking to SAPD command staff about constructive criticism on my attitude and on my work. After I receive this criticism, I am going to take it to heart, and work on it. After I have learned all of my flaws, and worked out all of the kinks, I will be ready for my cadet rank.

Thanks,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Shawn Edwards on July 29, 2010, 04:54:33 am
Good luck Coley. I have seen how you truly changed the last couple of days. I wish you the best in SAPD.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 29, 2010, 05:44:14 am
Good luck Coley. I have seen how you truly changed the last couple of days. I wish you the best in SAPD.

Thank you officer Shawn. What we have gone through, hearing that from you, then I think I have changed.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 29, 2010, 09:59:57 am
Recommended

Good luck Coley.

Thanks Rosco.  :rofl: ;)
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Shawn Edwards on July 29, 2010, 18:15:29 pm
San Andreas Police Department,

   Free Officer Coley_B has been successfully accepted into our program. He will undergo different training sessions to insure that he will be well suited for the Academy of the San Andreas Police Department. All training reports of this Free Officer will be posted appropriately in this application. In the event that this Free Officer becomes a Cadet in the middle of our program training, he will be dropped from our program to focus on the San Andreas Police Department. I am looking forward to working with you to insure that every community member has a great experience in Law Enforcement. If you have any questions or concerns, you can contact me through forum PM, or view our topic Here. (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/index.php?option=com_smf&Itemid=34&topic=12039.msg92619#new)

In Best Regards,
Director Shawn Edwards
Argonath "Freecop" Training Academy
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: JRockie on July 29, 2010, 20:03:17 pm
Good luck
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 29, 2010, 20:34:08 pm
Patrol Report:

Date of patrol: 7/29/10
Number of Traffic Stop: 11
Number of Suspects jail: 6
Number of suspects taken down: 4

MAJOR CALLS RESPONDED TO:
Code 30/11-99: 3
10-80: 4
Alarms in Progress: 4
Fire Calls: 7

Signed,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Mac_Cabrazi on July 29, 2010, 22:37:08 pm
Recommended for cadet.  He has changed a lot.  His skills in traffic enforcement are amazing.  He's been pulling over speeders left and right.  Good luck Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Kenny on July 29, 2010, 22:47:51 pm
not Recomended
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Shawn Edwards on July 29, 2010, 22:53:01 pm
not Recomended

Coley please do not reply to this post. Just ignore. I want the best for you.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: [Rstar]Vince on July 29, 2010, 22:55:29 pm
not Recomended

Why lol?
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: James Bowling on July 29, 2010, 23:16:56 pm
not Recomended

Why lol?

Because Cloley got in a fight with him on the

ARPD What Does it mean? (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/index.php?option=com_smf&Itemid=34&topic=12029.msg92651#new) Topic


@Coley: And you say my Attitude is horible, how about your BS Sarcasm and acting like mr perfect english, you just taunting people so you can get flammed but i will keep cool, you aint worth it.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Shawn Edwards on July 29, 2010, 23:21:50 pm
Come one guys. Stop dragging that garbage all around the forums. This is a application.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 30, 2010, 03:07:38 am
San Andreas Police Department,

I am Shawn Edwards the Director of the Argonath Freecops Training Academy. Free Officer Coley_B has been successfully accepted into our program. He will undergo different training sessions to insure that he will be well suited for the Academy of the San Andreas Police Department. All training reports of this Free Officer will be posted appropriately in this application. In the event that this Free Officer becomes a Cadet will in the middle of our program training, he will be dropped from our program to focus on the San Andreas Police Department. I am looking forward to working with you to insure that every community member has a great experience in Law Enforcement. If you have any questions or concerns, you can contact me through forum PM, or view our topic Here. (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/index.php?option=com_smf&Itemid=34&topic=12039.msg92619#new)

In Best Regards,
Director Shawn Edwards
Argonath "Freecop" Training Academy

Thanks for the support buddy.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: James Bowling on July 30, 2010, 05:24:44 am
Recommended, The officer in discussion can have an attitude at certain times and be a bit wordy like myself but He knows all his stuff. He is a decent shot he knows when to shoot and when to try to preserve life and he knows how to train other freecops / ACSD members. I think the Academy would be great full to have him.

Singed

SAPD Academy Instructor.
Sergeant James Bowling
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Sago on July 30, 2010, 05:25:46 am
Your attitude still needs slight improvement. :cop:
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 30, 2010, 06:03:18 am
Your attitude still needs slight improvement. :cop:

PM me in-game please.

Thanks,
Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Adem on July 30, 2010, 07:32:45 am
Good Luck
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 30, 2010, 07:33:58 am
Good Luck

Thanks you sir.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on July 31, 2010, 07:26:35 am
Patrol Report:

Date of patrol: 7/30/10
Number of Traffic Stop: 4
Number of Suspects jail: 6
Number of suspects taken down: 2

MAJOR CALLS RESPONDED TO:
Code 30/11-99: 1
10-80: 2
Alarms in Progress: 1
Fire Calls: 5

Signed,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 01, 2010, 09:46:15 am
Patrol Report:

Date of patrol: 7/31/10
Number of Traffic Stop: 3
Number of Suspects jail: 2
Number of suspects taken down: 4

MAJOR CALLS RESPONDED TO:
Code 30/11-99: 4
10-80: 6
Alarms in Progress: 3
Fire Calls: 7

Signed,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 02, 2010, 07:05:25 am
Patrol Report:

Date of patrol: 8/1/10
Number of Traffic Stop: 1
Number of Suspects jail: 2
Number of suspects taken down: 1

MAJOR CALLS RESPONDED TO:
Code 30/11-99: 3
10-80: 5
Alarms in Progress: 5
Fire Calls: 4

Signed,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Jack on August 02, 2010, 16:53:43 pm
Coley, Why did you say that today?
You are not like that !

(http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/5759/coley.png) (http://img838.imageshack.us/my.php?image=coley.png)
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Mac_Cabrazi on August 02, 2010, 17:01:00 pm
probably being humorous and sarcastic. 
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 02, 2010, 17:51:06 pm
probably being humorous and sarcastic. 

^

You were on a felony stop, and most of the time, when you are on a felony stop, a cop comes and starts shooting without /crime'ing the person, and I was just saying that as a joke.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: [Rstar]Vince on August 03, 2010, 06:46:36 am
Joke or not.. it is inappropriate and disrespectful to whoever you were saying it to, and definitely not the attitude of a future SAPD officer Coley. You should know better, consider it a warning...
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 03, 2010, 11:07:36 am
Joke or not.. it is inappropriate and disrespectful to whoever you were saying it to, and definitely not the attitude of a future SAPD officer Coley. You should know better, consider it a warning...

I do apologize Chief. I do understand it was disrespectful, and I do apologize.

Patrol Report:


Date of patrol: 8/2/10
Number of Traffic Stop: 5
Number of Suspects jail: 3
Number of suspects taken down: 6

MAJOR CALLS RESPONDED TO:
Code 30/11-99: 5
10-80: 5
Alarms in Progress: 2
Fire Calls: 2

Signed,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Adem on August 03, 2010, 18:10:28 pm
Somewhat i think your attitude is way different and badder ingame then on forums.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 03, 2010, 18:46:40 pm
Somewhat i think your attitude is way different and badder ingame then on forums.

I am sorry it is "badder" in game.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Kenny on August 03, 2010, 19:40:41 pm
Somewhat i think your attitude is way different and badder ingame then on forums.

I am sorry it is "badder" in game.

What he meant to say was "worse" dont try to be a smartass, doesnt lead anywhere
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 03, 2010, 20:51:40 pm
Somewhat i think your attitude is way different and badder ingame then on forums.

I am sorry it is "badder" in game.

What he meant to say was "worse" dont try to be a smartass, doesnt lead anywhere

Try not to flame people on the forums and post remarks that throws my topic off course.
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 04, 2010, 11:19:04 am
Patrol Report:

Date of patrol: 8/3/10
Number of Traffic Stop: 4
Number of Suspects jail: 1
Number of suspects taken down: 11

MAJOR CALLS RESPONDED TO:
Code 30/11-99: 6
10-80: 9
Alarms in Progress: 8
Fire Calls: 2

Signed,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 05, 2010, 05:29:51 am
Patrol Report:

Date of patrol: 8/4/10
Number of Traffic Stop: 2
Number of Suspects jail: 1
Number of suspects taken down: 6

MAJOR CALLS RESPONDED TO:
Code 30/11-99: 4
10-80: 3
Alarms in Progress: 1
Fire Calls: 2

Signed,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: Coley on August 08, 2010, 00:48:34 am
Patrol Report:

Date of patrol: 8/7/10
Number of Traffic Stop: 6
Number of Suspects jail: 1
Number of suspects taken down: 3

MAJOR CALLS RESPONDED TO:
Code 30/11-99: 5
10-80: 4
Alarms in Progress: 0
Fire Calls: 3

Signed,
Deputy Coley/Soon to be Cadet Coley
Title: Re: SAPD: Coley_B.
Post by: [Rstar]Vince on August 11, 2010, 14:39:13 pm
As much as I thought you had changed for the better, I was wrong. Others have seen it to, and changed their recommendation for you being a Cadet after seeing it. Denied due to terrible attitude problems and ego-centric attitude. You may re-apply when you fix it.
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