Well First to tell you GOOD LUCK.
And now to start with some bad things:
I belive that you CAN'T Use SAPD Ranks in your Subdivision - As you are neither offical subdivision and aswell if you were you were not going to be allowed aswell.
Second you really should have put some more effort in the topic and make it look little more professional and some more thinking on it.
But anyways ranks and topic are just layer, the real thing is how you are GOING to work out there. I have noticed that neither one of your staff is a Experienced Player or police officer, I don't want talk about rank but for when your accounts are made and from how much time each one of you is here from.
So I would recommend you to hold making a division for sometime get experience and then do it again when you are all ready to ''Serve and Protect'' as finest as you can.
But anyways these are my advises and notes to you. Once again good luck and I hope I will have a chance to work with you.
Here is my Advise how topic should look like:
(http://i54.tinypic.com/v653ea.jpg)
Highway Patrol and Backup Unit
Description:
What is that? It's an organisation, which goal is to stop the war on roads. We are patrolling in highways, country side roads, and looking for speeders(not highways) and reckless drivers. If you want to join, you must: be a good rper, know how to drive, be a freecop (if anyone from official ARPD wants to join.
Ranks:
Lead Officers:
Thomas_Mirra and Storm_McDouglas
Chiefs:
Bob_Kery
Captains:
Alexander_Doni
Lieutenants:
None Yet
Sergeant:
None Yet
Senior Officer:
None Yet
Officers:
None Yet
Cadets:
None Yet
FreeOfficers:
None Yet
Applications:
Name and Lastname ingame:
Real name:
Your Age:
Your ICly age:
Your RP skills(from 1 to 10):
Your Email:
Skype:
Other COntacts:
Note:NO NEED OF PASSPORT OR DRIVERS LICENSE!!!
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I just used the information from your topic which is not a lot, so this can look actually very good if you put effort in it.
Well First to tell you GOOD LUCK.
And now to start with some bad things:
I belive that you CAN'T Use SAPD Ranks in your Subdivision - As you are neither offical subdivision and aswell if you were you were not going to be allowed aswell.
Second you really should have put some more effort in the topic and make it look little more professional and some more thinking on it.
But anyways ranks and topic are just layer, the real thing is how you are GOING to work out there. I have noticed that neither one of your staff is a Experienced Player or police officer, I don't want talk about rank but for when your accounts are made and from how much time each one of you is here from.
So I would recommend you to hold making a division for sometime get experience and then do it again when you are all ready to ''Serve and Protect'' as finest as you can.
But anyways these are my advises and notes to you. Once again good luck and I hope I will have a chance to work with you.
Here is my Advise how topic should look like:
(http://i54.tinypic.com/v653ea.jpg)
Highway Patrol and Backup Unit
Description:
What is that? It's an organisation, which goal is to stop the war on roads. We are patrolling in highways, country side roads, and looking for speeders(not highways) and reckless drivers. If you want to join, you must: be a good rper, know how to drive, be a freecop (if anyone from official ARPD wants to join.
Ranks:
Lead Officers:
Thomas_Mirra and Storm_McDouglas
Chiefs:
Bob_Kery
Captains:
Alexander_Doni
Lieutenants:
None Yet
Sergeant:
None Yet
Senior Officer:
None Yet
Officers:
None Yet
Cadets:
None Yet
FreeOfficers:
None Yet
Applications:
Name and Lastname ingame:
Real name:
Your Age:
Your ICly age:
Your RP skills(from 1 to 10):
Your Email:
Skype:
Other COntacts:
Note:NO NEED OF PASSPORT OR DRIVERS LICENSE!!!
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I just used the information from your topic which is not a lot, so this can look actually very good if you put effort in it.
Well, im working on Adobe Photoshop cs5 on making ranks. so i think today you will be able to see them. Also, im new in PhotoShop.