Argonath RPG Police Department

GTA: San Andreas => SA:MP Application Desk => SAPD Information Center => Rejected Applications => Topic started by: GriveTheMan on January 19, 2011, 05:29:39 am

Title: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 19, 2011, 05:29:39 am
Ingame Nickname AND Character Name (warning, see point #9 of application rules):Grive_Boizja--This is the name when I am onlyduty,rp..
Real-Life Age AND Ingame Age:15 , 21
How long have you played on Argonath RPG:2 Months+
How long have you played as a cop: About a month.
Are you a United States of Argonath Citizen (do you have a passport)?:Yes.
Do you have a driver's license (issued by driving school)?:Yes.
Have you read all "SAPD Police Procedures" topics?Yes.
Have you been an SAPD member before? (cadet or above):No.
If yes, explain your previous rank in SAPD, did you resign, rejected or fired?No.
Had an previous application that go rejected? (add link to old application):Yes,that was when the forums closed down and I took a break from ARGO shortly.
Why do you want to join San Andreas Police Department (minimum of 3 sentence):I want to join simply to protect Argonath. To take down criminals. To basically clean the streets of Argonath.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: TinMan on January 20, 2011, 04:43:58 am
100 PERCENT RECOMMENDED

Today, we had a huge C30 with Araatus. In the radio, I requested all units to report to the LSPD Garage. There were 5 freecops altogether, not including me. Some of those officer have left my patrol car or died or I don't know. Ended up that he was still in my car with another officer. He is a great listener and does what you will say. We killed 2 Araatus guys including Squeak Araatus with tatical work. He would be great to the force. There may be a few things that you should work on, but so far as a freecop he is good.

My advice to you is to keep on patrolling with officers, and you will learn a lot.

Signed,
TinMan
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: SkyHawk on January 20, 2011, 05:02:58 am
Has my recommendation. I have seen your in the field work and it is outstanding. Try working on the behind the scenes things of the SAPD such as code memorization and patrol around with any SAPD officer that allows you to. Your a great officer, with attentative listening skills and I believe you will suceed very far. Keep up the good work.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 20, 2011, 06:24:36 am
And now...It's time for Grive's report card.

Grive_Boizja's Report Card --Date listed on the day this was posted.

Grive's hours of patrolling : 4+

Criminal Tracking : 3 or 4.

Criminal Pursits joined in : 4.

Did you have partners?If so list them : Tinman,and the other dude that was in the car...

Last but not least SHOW YOUR SCREENSHOTS!:
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Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: TinMan on January 20, 2011, 06:37:26 am
The other guy was Nurullah_Vurucu.

TinMan takes the card and rips it in half.

Get to work.  ;)

I might do an official training with you to see what kind of skills you have and give you some helpful tips.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: [Rstar]Vince on January 21, 2011, 03:13:39 am
Application looks good, please add your ingame name (not rp one) and possibly some more detail as to why you want to join if possible. Thanks!

-Dpt
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 21, 2011, 04:12:28 am
Application looks good, please add your ingame name (not rp one) and possibly some more detail as to why you want to join if possible. Thanks!

-Dpt
My real ingame name is Grive_FalconeT, the reason I want to join is because I want to protect Argonath's streets of criminal activities and so that all Is safe...plus it would give me work to do instead of just sitting around..I would be chasing criminals and I would gladly appreciate it.

EDIT: And now Grive finishes his lastest report card.

Grive_Boizja's Report Card --Date listed on the day this was posted.

Grive's hours of patrolling : 2+

Criminal Tracking : 2[Some I didn't finish because I gotta go. Sorry.]

Criminal Pursits joined in :3.

Did you have partners?If so list them : Not today...I was patroling alone but I did attempt to try and get a partner but no one would.

Last but not least SHOW YOUR SCREENSHOTS!:
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Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: Cortez on January 22, 2011, 04:37:26 am
Has my recomendation, I've patrolled and fought along side him, a great RPer, and an even better cop.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 22, 2011, 04:39:16 am
Thankyou all,i appreciate it.
Grive's Report Card:

Grive_Boizja's Report Card --Date listed on the day this was posted.

Grive's hours of patrolling : 5+

Criminal Tracking : 3

Criminal Pursits joined in :4.

Did you have partners?If so list them : Patrolled with Joe_Jon.

Last but not least SHOW YOUR SCREENSHOTS!:
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Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: Mack on January 22, 2011, 09:32:20 am
Hello Applicant,

More than the number of suspects you killed or arrested, we want to see your skills as an officer.
Please describe the situations of the arrests, take downs, or investigations if any done along with the screens you post.

Reading from the above posts, it seems you are a good officer, however another way to reflect it would be to file few reports every now and then with little details.

Good luck with your application, and on the way to the Cadet Academy.

Signed,
Senior Officer Sophie K. Miles
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 22, 2011, 20:16:40 pm
Hello Applicant,

More than the number of suspects you killed or arrested, we want to see your skills as an officer.
Please describe the situations of the arrests, take downs, or investigations if any done along with the screens you post.

Reading from the above posts, it seems you are a good officer, however another way to reflect it would be to file few reports every now and then with little details.

Good luck with your application, and on the way to the Cadet Academy.

Signed,
Senior Officer Sophie K. Miles

Omgz,thnx ms.Sophie..
[[RESERVED]]

Grive_Boizja's Report Card ;
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Suspects tracked:

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Descriptions of Best arrests/etc today:

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Suspects tooken down:

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Partners:

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Screenshots:
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: Sushi on January 23, 2011, 01:23:59 am
Perhaps this will help. Here's a little gem I collected of Vince explaining the 'report expectations' of applicants in greater detail.

Application so far looks good, please post reports that include roleplay scenarios, special operations, etc. as well as the basics. Remember we are not looking for how many suspects you can kill or jail, but how well you can RP with officers, citizens, and even suspects as well as your teamwork and cop work.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 23, 2011, 03:05:35 am
Perhaps this will help. Here's a little gem I collected of Vince explaining the 'report expectations' of applicants in greater detail.

Application so far looks good, please post reports that include roleplay scenarios, special operations, etc. as well as the basics. Remember we are not looking for how many suspects you can kill or jail, but how well you can RP with officers, citizens, and even suspects as well as your teamwork and cop work.
If you want to see me RP and stuff then you'll have to come ingame and patrol with me. I can't post full rp here{Too much text and stuff} it's too much .. just a brief inview. I think I roleplay great though, look at what these people have said...Thanks guys for your support!

Grive_Boizja's Report Card ;

Suspects tracked:About 4


Descriptions of Best arrests/etc today:Today I was just patroling with Joe_Jon and going around city and checking out stuff...I've arrested a man who had weapons and have framed him to the cells.


Suspects tooken down:1


Partners:Joseph_Carter


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Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: Sushi on January 23, 2011, 09:39:28 am
That's just the point. The Academy staff WANT to see RP material in reports, not just essentially useless numbers. This is from the Deputy Chief and I'd assume you'd abide by the requirements as said by him in the official Academy Updates Centre.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 25, 2011, 05:49:54 am
This app will be continued tommorrow or so cause I got stuff to do. Kthx.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: [Rstar]Vince on January 26, 2011, 01:54:12 am
We understand that not everyone is capable nor wants to write long detailed summaries of their days, but as explained previously the Academy and myself included want to see how well you can roleplay and work together. We do not care how many suspects you can kill to be honest, as that doesn't matter to me or SAPD.. Just a description, I'll give you an example.

(Use your own format here)
...

Report: Today went pretty well, was my first time back on active duty patrolling in quite some time. Patrolled with Sergeant Daniels as well as Sergeant Kenny and an LVPD Recruit in the same TS channel. Patrolled the most populated areas of LS, pulled over a speeder (Reg. plate 0_6_6). Successfully pulled over at first with help from ARPD officer Neave, yet the bloke then pulled off. Pursued by Oliver and myself and Kenny and his partner, eventually stopped and neutralized. Later towards the end of the patrol I stopped by Jefferson church to have a small meeting with the father there about donating to the church. I made the donation for the better of the people, and soon after had to go after driving to my house for the end of the day.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 26, 2011, 08:27:43 am
Hey it's back.

Grive_Boizja's Report Card --Date listed on the day this was posted.

Grive's hours of patrolling : 30+mins(Sleeptime)

Criminal Tracking : 2

Criminal Pursits joined in :2.

Did you have partners?If so list them : Not today.

Last but not least SHOW YOUR SCREENSHOTS!:
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Summary:Today was just kind of a regular day, not much roleplay. I was on cop duty for a bit of the night and I managed to try and takedown 2 suspects. One failed because he shot me with heavy weapons. Second one just ran off. That was it for today. Sorry!
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 27, 2011, 02:00:23 am
Grive_Boizja's Report Card --Date listed on the day this was posted.

Grive's hours of patrolling : 2h

Criminal Tracking : 5.

Criminal Pursits joined in :4.

Did you have partners?If so list them : Jctodds,Ghostx,Rui,Andy_saes

Last but not least SHOW YOUR SCREENSHOTS!:
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Summary:Today, I was rolling with Jctodds and some other people in the awesome cop car. We were on a persuit chasing criminals and they ran from us but some we took and got em' shot. I think today was a pretty great day for some roleplay. I did roleplay in the car...and outside..
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: Sushi on January 27, 2011, 04:54:56 am
I'd advise reading, re-reading and re-reading Vince's post again. Then repeat about five times just to make sure it sinks in.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 27, 2011, 05:31:05 am
I'd advise reading, re-reading and re-reading Vince's post again. Then repeat about five times just to make sure it sinks in.
I did what he asked, a summary of the day.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 28, 2011, 06:32:41 am
Summary:Today I was patrolling and had pulled over a suspect because I believed he was drunk and so I asked him for his license and everything. It was valid so I let him off for it. Then I went around Los Santos and just chillax until there was a firemission so I came over there with my PDcopter and helped out. After that I was just patrolling the streets of Los Santos chillax'd and hung out.
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Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on January 30, 2011, 03:26:32 am
I am apologizing for this.
Please excuse me for a day...It's because today I am tired. Expect a report tommorrow. ThankYou fellow officers.
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on February 01, 2011, 06:25:10 am
Crap this was yesterday's report . I must've forgotten.

Summary:Okay so in the morning I was just patroling as usaul and went with my fellow officers to go do some training. We went to learn to shoot and how to catch a suspect. I think I did okay. I roleplayed and talked to the cops and it was pretty fun. I was patroling with officer Tinman,Fred_Gordon,and Vincent_Burtson that day.

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Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: GriveTheMan on February 03, 2011, 21:33:18 pm
Sorry I was not here for past couple of days, i'll try to get on today!
Title: Re: SAPD: Grive_FalconeT
Post by: James Bowling on February 26, 2011, 01:08:29 am
Rejected due to Lack of Interest. You have failed to adhere to our rule on activity on your application. We hope you will re-apply when you have more time to devote to the SAPD.

NOTE TO ALL APPLICANTS:

If you fail to post at least once every week (7 days) you will be denied for lack of interest.
Too often we rack up 4 pages of apps with no post at all.

Also, if you post a reply just saying "bump" instead of an activity report / patrol report you will be denied as well.

Signed,

Lieutenant James Bowling
SAPD Application Handler.
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