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General => General Discussion => Topic started by: Deagle_Smith on January 21, 2012, 17:31:51 pm

Title: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Deagle_Smith on January 21, 2012, 17:31:51 pm

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Welcolm To ATF

Hello Evry one evry one will ask what ATF is well i will tell you right now - ATF is Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms we are trying to stop the people using drungs and stop selling them we are after the drungs deals not only the most of time we are following the big crimis we are grouph who respond to big crimis or litle we patroling some times but the most times we wait for backup call or UC duty !

This ATF is

Our HQ is at Bone County,Fort Carson for now !

ATF Rules

1. If you are a part of ATF you cant sell drungs or any think illegal like this

2. IF you are a Part of ATF you cant becoum Criminal - If some one do it the 1st warning will be give out in the 2nd warning he will get kicket

3. Allways Follow Highter Rank Orders. If you dont follow the orders at kiddnap or Bank roberry and etc. This can make you kicket

4. Allways Respect Our Meambers

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Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Francisco Martinez on January 21, 2012, 17:37:53 pm

Try to fix your text. It will look more professional. Drungs -> Drugs . Kicket -> Kicked. Highter -> Higher

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3. Allways Follow Highter Rank Orders. If you dont follow the orders at kiddnap or Bank roberry and etc. This can make you kicket

If it's a brigade against Alcohol, Tobacco and Firearms why should you participate in kidnaps/robberies?

From my point of view you better structure it up a little bit before showing it to public.
Good luck.

LVPD Senior Officer,
Eric "Morais" Nolan

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Chief J. Schappell on January 22, 2012, 01:54:59 am

You may wish to rename your organization too if you deal with drugs. Please also be careful as FBI and the PD's both also deal with drug cases.

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Huntsman on January 22, 2012, 16:57:22 pm

Also can you stop trying to compete my groups? Seriously -_-.

Since you got fired from BCSD, you made TRSD, failed, now, you use BCSD's and RCSD's areas for your Head Quarters.
I mean, it aint nothing illegal but please....

Also, dont we have FBI for this?

And as well, before starting groups like this, you might want to improve your english.
And why is this in ARPD forums? This isnt PD related, because i suspect that you will be off duty while performing ATF duties..

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Jason Bridges on January 22, 2012, 22:16:46 pm

Not meaning to sound rude but it's very disorganised in the way it's been presented and the purpose of it. You haven't got one sentence that is correctly spelt, you've basically just merged the jobs of FBI (UC duties that you mentions) and normal police duty. "alcohol, tobacco, firearms and explosives"? I can understand why you have firearms and alcohol there, but tobacco and explosives? A bit random really considering tobacco isn't illegal and there are no issues with it anyway and more or less the same for explosives. Like everybody else has suggested you should really fix this topic because despite the interesting ideas you have, it's poorly written and this will discourage people from joining.

But nevertheless, good luck with it anyway

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: [Rstar]Paul on January 23, 2012, 02:12:21 am

The player is legal with his division - His trying to actually improve his organization skills within the Community.
There is not faults within the division for one.

Any comments against this division will be extremely dealt with disciplinary action.

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Deagle_Smith on January 23, 2012, 09:11:13 am

Quote from: Paul on January 23, 2012, 02:12:21 am

The player is legal with his division - His trying to actually improve his organization skills within the Community.
There is not faults within the division for one.

Any comments against this division will be extremely dealt with disciplinary action.

Finley some one who undestand it :)

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Jcstodds on January 23, 2012, 09:56:42 am

  Illegal imports of counterfeit tobacco is a major crime and I'm glad there is now a unit that can investigate it. Close down all the 24/7s!

  Also many bars and areas in SA are not licensed to sell alcohol... and there is even some illegal homebrewing going on (just dont come to Fort Carson).

  And as for explosives and firearms... actually yeah just stay out of Fort Carson please.


Good luck!

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Huntsman on January 23, 2012, 14:08:17 pm

Quote from: Paul on January 23, 2012, 02:12:21 am

The player is legal with his division - His trying to actually improve his organization skills within the Community.
There is not faults within the division for one.

Any comments against this division will be extremely dealt with disciplinary action.

Not trying to be an idiot here, but isnt it a violation of freedom of speech? ;s

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Plam Knight on January 23, 2012, 14:19:04 pm

Quote from: Max Peterson Payne on January 23, 2012, 14:08:17 pm

Quote from: Paul on January 23, 2012, 02:12:21 am

The player is legal with his division - His trying to actually improve his organization skills within the Community.
There is not faults within the division for one.

Any comments against this division will be extremely dealt with disciplinary action.

Not trying to be an idiot here, but isnt it a violation of freedom of speech? ;s

There is difference between freedom of speech and shitting/flaming towards a person/group/division and etc....

Quote from: Max Peterson Payne on January 22, 2012, 16:57:22 pm

Also can you stop trying to compete my groups? Seriously -_-.

Since you got fired from BCSD, you made TRSD, failed, now, you use BCSD's and RCSD's areas for your Head Quarters.
I mean, it aint nothing illegal but please....

Also, dont we have FBI for this?

And as well, before starting groups like this, you might want to improve your english.
And why is this in ARPD forums? This isnt PD related, because i suspect that you will be off duty while performing ATF duties..

As well no offense but BCSD isn't more special then any other division/group.
Towards your second sentence I point out my first answer - BCSD is a division like every other, he has full right to do whatever he wants.
Indeed we have FBI and SAPD UC to handle this job, still Argonath is a place for everyone to enjoy their fair share of RP.
And this is the place for every division to post its own topic, same way ARPD allowed you to post your division's topic here.


Other then that nice idea officer, we are looking forward to see how are you going to develop your division and as well if you ever need help or anything like that, just post here and our experienced SAPD members will assist you.

Signed by,
S.A.P.D. Captain P. Knight

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Deagle_Smith on January 23, 2012, 15:49:26 pm

Quote from: Jcstodds on January 23, 2012, 09:56:42 am

  Illegal imports of counterfeit tobacco is a major crime and I'm glad there is now a unit that can investigate it. Close down all the 24/7s!

  Also many bars and areas in SA are not licensed to sell alcohol... and there is even some illegal homebrewing going on (just dont come to Fort Carson).

  And as for explosives and firearms... actually yeah just stay out of Fort Carson please.


Good luck!

Well our hq is at fort carson we will not stay there much only when we will regrouphing actualy we will stay much at SF,LV there is alot of criminals but the citys dont got much Units

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Deagle_Smith on January 23, 2012, 15:52:54 pm

Today we will send special UC units off duty to check the drung spots and for dealers alcohols and tobacco

We also will check the trafic for Firearms guys to take the city out of danger

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Huntsman on January 23, 2012, 17:14:43 pm

As well no offense but BCSD isn't more special then any other division/group.

I never told that now did i?

But it's not the fact, the fact is he has been trying to compete with any groups i make since he got fired,
But anyways, if you want to continue further on this subject PM me.

PROVOKATION, I advise you to really look in to that offensive behavior of yours, first and last warning. - Captain Plam Knight

Title: Re: ATF Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco,Drungs,Firearms
Post by: Jason Bridges on January 23, 2012, 18:41:11 pm

I still stick with what I said before about the improvements and layout of it, but I do really like the idea, it just needs to be thought through a bit more and then I'm sure you'll get a fair few officers interested ;)