Argonath RPG Police Department

GTA: San Andreas => SA:MP Application Desk => SAPD Information Center => Rejected Applications => Topic started by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 08:41:13 am

Title: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 08:41:13 am
SAPD Application (Argo)dyl

Nickname (ingame): (Argo)dyl
Nickname (character): Dylan
Argonath Forums nickname: dyl
Previous names: N/A
Age (ingame and real-life): 26/14
What is your timezone: GMT

How long have you played ArgonathRPG?: I've played since the 21st October 2011
Do you have a passport?: Yes
Do you have a license?: Yes
Have you ever been in SAPD before?, If you have, why did you leave? (If not, leave blank): -
Have you ever applied to SAPD, and have gotten denied? If you have, provide your old applications link (If not, leave blank): Yes - Click (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=23119.0), Click (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=23196.0), Click (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=23194.0)
Are you or have you been in any criminal groups? If yes, which?: No
How long you play a day: 6-7 hours.
Do you have any difficulties with speaking English?: No

Do you agree with the Application Rules?: Yes
Have you read all SAPD Police Procedures?: Yes
What would make you an good officer?: I Would make the streets much more safer do trafic stops on people who need to and ill help my partners , i would partol areas respond to all emergencies.
Do you have experience on law enforcement groups?: No
Describe your work as an SAPD officer: Well i would respond to all emergency I would make the streets safer and a better place i would plane drug busts go on trafic stops , partol al cinds on situation,ect.
Why do you want the join the San Andreas Police Department (Minimum of 100 Words!): I want to join the SAPD because I wont to clean the streets of Las santos make it a better place for All off the  citizens who live in the city of Las santos and all area throw the country, Like i said i am a very good at all different situations !!!, I love my job as An officer at the moment But i wont to step my game up and Be that officers who saves peoples lifes , i wont to be that hero , I am good and shotting , runing , (CATCHING SUSPECT) respond to emergencys, with that siren going just makes me think Um i wont to step my game up so hear i am wonting a job, As a SAPD officer I Hope the Is good For me to get in.I certify that all information is true and correct.



I certify that all information is true and correct.
(Argo)dyl

- October 21st, 2011
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Reece on February 12, 2012, 09:13:13 am
Your format is totally incorrect....

Please see the sticky topics on how to make it correct.
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 09:14:01 am
ok i very sorry about it but is it ok other then that
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 10:22:22 am
http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/ (http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/)

theres one picture on there of the 1 suspect i arested but then i joined a chase when i had one suspect in my partol car and then aresterd both of them
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Lincoln_Brown on February 12, 2012, 11:26:06 am
You need a lot of improvements, man. Use the correct form for the application and for the activity report before they deny you.
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 11:44:32 am
well i am sorry but i am looking at other peoples and theres just like mine and fine
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Reece on February 12, 2012, 13:45:09 pm
Yours is nothing like anybody elses.

http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=20016.msg196336#msg196336 (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=20016.msg196336#msg196336)

Make the questions bold, answers not bold. Also read all sticky topics, your missing a detail.
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 15:09:22 pm
i just changed it is that ok
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Tom Evans on February 12, 2012, 15:25:41 pm
dyl copy the code and complete your form because if you copy it from other application the form's bb codes does not effect(like reece said they aren't blond.)


http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=20016.msg196336#msg196336 (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=20016.msg196336#msg196336) Here copy the CODE...
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 15:42:26 pm
Yes i dun i now
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 15:57:30 pm
Patrol Report
(http://i51.tinypic.com/1673sjm.png)
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Date of Patrol:February 12,
date here


Suspects Killed/Arrested:
Killed: 0
Arrested: 2


Civilians Stopped/Ticketed:
Stopped:1
Ticketed:0


Patrol Time:
1


Patrol Partners:
none


Conclusion of day in work: /
'conclusion of day in work'  Well this morning i got called to a 911 call about 2males speeding and shotting i stoped them and suspected chased round las santos and then there car blow up , so then i begin to shot the give up i take them to sfpd and jail them.


Signed,
Dylan
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Tom Evans on February 12, 2012, 16:08:35 pm
Code: [Select]
[b][size=14pt]SAPD Application <NAME>[/size][/b]

[b]Nickname (ingame):[/b]
[b]Nickname (character):[/b]
[b]Argonath Forums nickname:[/b]
[b]Previous names:[/b]
[b]Age (ingame and real-life):[/b]
[b]What is your timezone:[/b]

[b]How long have you played ArgonathRPG?:[/b]
[b]Do you have a passport?:[/b]
[b]Do you have a license?:[/b]
[b]Have you ever been in SAPD before?, If you have, why did you leave? (If not, leave blank):[/b]
[b]Have you ever applied to SAPD, and have gotten denied? If you have, provide your old applications link (If not, leave blank):[/b]
[b]Are you or have you been in any criminal groups? If yes, which?:[/b]
[b]How long you play a day:[/b]
[b]Do you have any difficulties with speaking English?:[/b]

[b]Do you agree with the Application Rules?:[/b]
[b]Have you read all SAPD Police Procedures?:[/b]
[b]What would make you an good officer?:[/b]
[b]Do you have experience on law enforcement groups?:[/b]
[b]Describe your work as an SAPD officer:[/b]
[b]Why do you want the join the San Andreas Police Department (Minimum of 100 Words!):[/b]


[i]I certify that all information is true and correct.[/i]
<NAME>
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 16:09:58 pm
lol i dun it right now :)
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 17:52:53 pm
Patrol Report
(http://i51.tinypic.com/1673sjm.png)
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Date of Patrol:
12 February 


Suspects Killed/Arrested:
Killed:3
Arrested:2


Civilians Stopped/Ticketed:
Stopped:4
Ticketed:1


Patrol Time:
2 and 30mins about that


Patrol Partners:
Duel and then Darrel_Philips


Conclusion of day in work:
'Well to start with i was on trafic duty so i was partoling flint intersaction the first one was a speeder going over 140km so we pulled him over and he drove of (so we chased him) and arested the suspect and later jaild for evading areast , then wew got a code 30 at sf ammunation sore we responded and 2suspects where shotting so we had no choice to take them down with force , later on the day past we pulled over a few people and gave them warnings and then we got a report of a kidnape so all units respond (i laged ) so i run over the suspect meaning he was down 


Signed,
(Argo)dyl
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 12, 2012, 19:50:18 pm
You have 24 hours to fix your application. A rejection follows.
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 20:04:59 pm
it is fixed just like alll the others
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 12, 2012, 20:23:08 pm
it is fixed just like alll the others

You didn't fix it.
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 20:38:08 pm
i did and ok if its shit not being funny deny i am stop going to make SAPD ill try my best ffs
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 12, 2012, 20:40:55 pm
I don't like your attitude. More will have you rejected. It's not my problem that you cannot copy and paste a format.
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 20:44:38 pm
No all my applications and been rejected for that i did copy and past the one all off u supply please just let me with this one dude
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 12, 2012, 20:47:36 pm
SAPD Application <NAME>

Nickname (ingame):
Nickname (character):
Argonath Forums nickname:
Previous names:
Age (ingame and real-life):
What is your timezone:

How long have you played ArgonathRPG?:
Do you have a passport?:
Do you have a license?:
Have you ever been in SAPD before?, If you have, why did you leave? (If not, leave blank):
Have you ever applied to SAPD, and have gotten denied? If you have, provide your old applications link (If not, leave blank):
Are you or have you been in any criminal groups? If yes, which?:
How long you play a day:
Do you have any difficulties with speaking English?:

Do you agree with the Application Rules?:
Have you read all SAPD Police Procedures?:
What would make you an good officer?:
Do you have experience on law enforcement groups?:
Describe your work as an SAPD officer:
Why do you want the join the San Andreas Police Department (Minimum of 100 Words!):


I certify that all information is true and correct.
<NAME>



Code: [Select]
[b][size=14pt]SAPD Application <NAME>[/size][/b]

[b]Nickname (ingame):[/b]
[b]Nickname (character):[/b]
[b]Argonath Forums nickname:[/b]
[b]Previous names:[/b]
[b]Age (ingame and real-life):[/b]
[b]What is your timezone:[/b]

[b]How long have you played ArgonathRPG?:[/b]
[b]Do you have a passport?:[/b]
[b]Do you have a license?:[/b]
[b]Have you ever been in SAPD before?, If you have, why did you leave? (If not, leave blank):[/b]
[b]Have you ever applied to SAPD, and have gotten denied? If you have, provide your old applications link (If not, leave blank):[/b]
[b]Are you or have you been in any criminal groups? If yes, which?:[/b]
[b]How long you play a day:[/b]
[b]Do you have any difficulties with speaking English?:[/b]

[b]Do you agree with the Application Rules?:[/b]
[b]Have you read all SAPD Police Procedures?:[/b]
[b]What would make you an good officer?:[/b]
[b]Do you have experience on law enforcement groups?:[/b]
[b]Describe your work as an SAPD officer:[/b]
[b]Why do you want the join the San Andreas Police Department (Minimum of 100 Words!):[/b]


[i]I certify that all information is true and correct.[/i]
<NAME>




All answers go after the {/b} tags!

Make it work, this is your last chance. And, I'm not a "dude" to you.
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 20:50:44 pm
Ok I am sorry for calling you a dude i will do it right away
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 20:59:55 pm
i changed it sir !
Title: Re: SAPD Application -(Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 12, 2012, 21:01:00 pm

Nickname (ingame): (Argo)dyl
Nickname (character):Dylan
Argonath Forums nickname: Dyl
Previous names: dyl
Age (ingame and real-life): In game 31 in real 19
What is your timezone: GMT

How long have you played ArgonathRPG?: 5-6 mouths
Do you have a passport?: Yes
Do you have a license?: Yes
Have you ever been in SAPD before?, If you have, why did you leave? (If not, leave blank):[/b]
Have you ever applied to SAPD, and have gotten denied? If you have, provide your old applications link (If not, leave blank):sorry cant find link.
Are you or have you been in any criminal groups? If yes, which?: No
Do you agree with the Application Rules?: Yes
Have you read all SAPD Police Procedures?: Yes
What would make you an good officer?: I Would make the streets much more safer do trafic stops on people who need to and ill help my partners , i would partol areas respond to all emergencys.
Do you have experience on law enforcement groups?: Yes
Describe your work as an SAPD officer: Well i would respond to all emergency I would make the streets safer and a better place i would plane drug busts go on trafic stops , partol al cinds on situation,ect.
Why do you want the join the San Andreas Police Department (Minimum of 100 Words!):I want to join the SAPD because I wont to clean the streets of Las santos make it a better place for All off the  citizens who live in the city of Las santos and all area throw the country, Like i said i am a very good at all different situations !!!, I love my job as An officer at the moment But i wont to step my game up and Be that officers who saves peoples lifes , i wont to be that hero , I am good and shotting , runing , (CATCHING SUSPECT) respond to emergencys, with that siren going just makes me think Um i wont to step my game up so hear i am wonting a job, As a SAPD officer I Hope the Is good For me to get in.I certify that all information is true and correct.



I certify that all information is true and correct.
Dylan

I have implanted the format into your application. I want you to place your answers into it.
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 21:03:06 pm
May i ask you what you mean bye that cant i just copy and past
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 12, 2012, 21:03:53 pm
May i ask you what you mean bye that cant i just copy and past

Just sit tight. I'll fix it!
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 21:05:32 pm
OMG would you , thanks Sir i really hope i get this job so i can see that what you are doing is not going to waste
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 12, 2012, 21:10:51 pm
OMG would you , thanks Sir i really hope i get this job so i can see that what you are doing is not going to waste

Alright, well good luck. Hope to see reports, not just issues in this application.
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 21:13:22 pm
Not being rude look on page 1 i got about 3 partol reports i am from england so ill be on it say all night so ill will be looking on hear and uploading police reportes
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 12, 2012, 21:14:50 pm
Not being rude look on page 1 i got about 3 partol reports i am from england so ill be on it say all night so ill will be looking on hear and uploading police reportes

No worries.  ;)
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 22:50:01 pm
umm i fort i would put this on hear this is a persute off a person i was chasing with a officer http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/?action=view&current=sa-mp-013.png (http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/?action=view&current=sa-mp-013.png)
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 12, 2012, 23:02:57 pm
(http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/9569/patchwithcuffs2200.png)
Patrol Report


Date: (February 12, 2012)

Length: (1 hour and 30mins)


Patrol Partner(s): (Gt0114)


Suspects Arrested: (1)
Suspects Killed: (7)


Investigations Performed: ( 1 lace answers here)


Tickets Issued: (0)
Civilians Stopped: (1)


Description of your shift: (Well today on partol we had many call outs all over the state so we where busy we had 1 investigation and 4 other call outs meaning we where busy all day on partol we stoped one car for speeding but minor so no ticket )


Dash-Cam Pictures:

-- http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/?action=view&current=sa-mp-013.png. (http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/?action=view&current=sa-mp-013.png.) --
-- http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/?action=view&current=sa-mp-012.pngt. (http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/?action=view&current=sa-mp-012.pngt.) --
-- Pictures go here. If none present, delete the statement. --
-- Pictures go here. If none present, delete the statement. --


Conclusion: (so all round today i think it went pretty well.)

  • -- Keep my Hard head On --
  • -- None --
  • -- Make sure i arest suspects not kill  --
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 15, 2012, 22:34:53 pm
(http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/9569/patchwithcuffs2200.png)
Patrol Report


Date: (February 15, 2012)

Length: (around 45 mins)


Patrol Partner(s): (silent_Reborn)


Suspects Arrested: (2)
Suspects Killed: (1)


Investigations Performed: (none)


Tickets Issued: (0)
Civilians Stopped: (1)


Description of your shift: (Well we started off in ls and stayed there We stoped a driver for speeding and then he ran so suspected him , he opend fire we shot him game over , then there was a hostige situation i did not kill but responded , the there was a mane beating a officer so we suspected catched the arested , then we went on partol at idlewood where there was a fight we sorted it out to a male pulled a gun we suspected and arested and thats really it.


Dash-Cam Pictures:

-- http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/?action=view&current=sa-mp-001.png (http://s1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh518/dylan_green1/?action=view&current=sa-mp-001.png)  of the hostige situation . --
-- Pictures go here. If none present, delete the statement. --
-- Pictures go here. If none present, delete the statement. --
-- Pictures go here. If none present, delete the statement. --


Conclusion: (place conclusion here)

  • -- Notes    well try to know all locations --
  • -- Questions  sorry have none --
  • -- Plans for improvements  speed up the responses --
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Reece on February 15, 2012, 23:24:23 pm
You should be rejected for this by now... however, I am going to give you ONE last chance.

Read EVERY sticky topic in this board from TOP to BOTTOM. Every post that is made in it, every single words, understand it all and add the missing detail.

24 Hours to find this and add it.
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 15, 2012, 23:48:47 pm
Not being rude sir if you Know the detall can you just tall me i have read the posts a million times
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Reece on February 15, 2012, 23:59:37 pm
No I cant tell you it. If you have read the posts a million times, your not reading them well enough.
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 16, 2012, 00:02:07 am
Ok Sir What Topic Do i Have To read to get the infomation And I am Not getting rejected I am going to try my best
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 16, 2012, 00:07:41 am
there we go alll fixed
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Reece on February 16, 2012, 01:23:39 am
Still not correct..
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 16, 2012, 03:15:30 am
Just make the freaking effort to read every topic, from top to bottom. It's not that hard. Consider yourself lucky that I wanted to help you out and actually fixed your application.
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 16, 2012, 08:26:25 am
Well i copyed the application Again on The Topic So It Should be fine now
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Reece on February 16, 2012, 10:05:14 am
no, no, no...

The formatting was fine.. Now it's incorrect again. Make the questions bold and the answers not bold..

(http://gyazo.com/61ad37354ec1224c7ecd75e3ef24c351.png?1329382493)

Read those... top to bottom...
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Julian_Garver on February 16, 2012, 11:54:34 am
Code: [Select]
[b][size=14pt]SAPD Application <NAME>[/size][/b]

[b]Nickname (ingame):[/b]
[b]Nickname (character):[/b]
[b]Argonath Forums nickname:[/b]
[b]Previous names:[/b]
[b]Age (ingame and real-life):[/b]
[b]What is your timezone:[/b]

[b]How long have you played ArgonathRPG?:[/b]
[b]Do you have a passport?:[/b]
[b]Do you have a license?:[/b]
[b]Have you ever been in SAPD before?, If you have, why did you leave? (If not, leave blank):[/b]
[b]Have you ever applied to SAPD, and have gotten denied? If you have, provide your old applications link (If not, leave blank):[/b]
[b]Are you or have you been in any criminal groups? If yes, which?:[/b]
[b]How long you play a day:[/b]
[b]Do you have any difficulties with speaking English?:[/b]

[b]Do you agree with the Application Rules?:[/b]
[b]Have you read all SAPD Police Procedures?:[/b]
[b]What would make you an good officer?:[/b]
[b]Do you have experience on law enforcement groups?:[/b]
[b]Describe your work as an SAPD officer:[/b]
[b]Why do you want the join the San Andreas Police Department (Minimum of 100 Words!):[/b]


[i]I certify that all information is true and correct.[/i]
<NAME>

Dylan copy paste this into your application you have a few things less and a few things more in your app please ajust it
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Fred on February 16, 2012, 12:20:00 pm
Nice to see your aplication here. Good luck.
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 16, 2012, 12:34:29 pm
Thanks Sir Is every thing Okay Now ! :leroy2:
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Reece on February 16, 2012, 14:18:52 pm
Nope. Formatting is still not correct.

The verification detail is not correct either, i'm not sure where you got that date from, but read the instructions again on how to get the correct one.
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 16, 2012, 15:06:34 pm
i dont know what u mean
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Janek on February 18, 2012, 18:34:13 pm
Applicant asked to inform you that he is away for the weekend, and will return on Monday.

Kind regards,


Pope.
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: criminal_scum on February 18, 2012, 19:30:09 pm
If you are to become an SAPD officer, make sure such attitude does not persist.

(http://s16.postimage.org/56d630wfn/sa_mp_096.png)
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Jim_Teixeira on February 19, 2012, 09:19:43 am
This officer is  RECOMENDED Due to:


Things to Improve:
Signed SAPD Cadet Teixeira
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 19, 2012, 19:02:04 pm
well sorry il be on now  i had family isuesls
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Marco Pierce on February 20, 2012, 21:12:58 pm
This officer is not Recommended from my side
Reason?

The past days Argodyl have been in the TS and disturbing our work, We are asking him to join but he refuses and makes fun of us and doing anoying sounds in the TS, Which is disturbing, We are telling him to switch channel if he dont want to join or be quite but he refuses, Failure to listen on some simple orders
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: dyl on February 20, 2012, 22:23:25 pm
well i am sorry i aAm new to teamspeack
Title: Re: SAPD Application | (Argo)dyl
Post by: Goodandy on February 23, 2012, 01:28:13 am




(http://i1013.photobucket.com/albums/af258/Polarr/Academylogo-2.png?t=1303575269)
Application Rejected!


Hello Applicant,

I regret to inform you that unfortunately your application has been
rejected.
A rejection can have several reasons, the following reason(s) apply to your rejection:

- Attitude unacceptable for SAPD!
- Choose to leave server.

Additional notes:
None.

IMPORTANT: If you do not agree with your rejection and you want to appeal for this, please send a PM towards
Academy Command:
Academy Chief Nexxt (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=829)
Academy Chief Kenny (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=603)


Signed,


Mr. Andrew Collin
SAPD Academy Management
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