Argonath RPG Police Department

GTA: San Andreas => SA:MP Application Desk => SAPD Information Center => Rejected Applications => Topic started by: Crimson_Laceed on June 14, 2012, 07:59:47 am

Title: apply for ARPD
Post by: Crimson_Laceed on June 14, 2012, 07:59:47 am

## NAME HERE Crimson_laceed
Status: Application waiting for approval

Personal Information:

Ingame Crimson_laceed
## ANSWER ##

Forumname:
## ANSWER Crimson_Laceed

Previous names:Crimson_laceed
## ANSWER ##

Age (ingame and in real-life):[13]
## ANSWER ##

What is your timezone?:[GMT=8]
## ANSWER ##

General Information:

What is your registration date on Argonath RPG? June,3 2012
## ANSWER ##

What is your ingame phonenumber?:675674
## ANSWER ##

Do you have a license and passport?:[yes]
## ANSWER ##

Do you frequently get warned ingame? (by admins or higher ranked cops):[no]
## ANSWER ##

Have you been (cop)banned before? If yes, please explain the bans (including copbans):
## ANSWER No

How long do you play a day?:[2-4 hours]
## ANSWER ##

Do you have any difficulties with the English language?:[No]
## ANSWER ##

SAPD Information:

Have you read all SAPD Police Procedures?:[yes]
## ANSWER ##

Do you agree with the Application Rules?:[Yes]
## ANSWER ##

Have you ever been in the SAPD before? If you have, why did you leave?:
## ANSWER No i did not get to be in the SAPD before

Have you ever applied to the SAPD before and got denied? If yes, please provide the link of your old application:
## ANSWER (No)

Please write down in atleast 150 words..
..what would make you a good officer?[Keep trying to become a good officer by helping those who need help and not ignoring them and suspect those who have commited crime and helping each another

]
..what experience do you have on law enforcement groups?[None
..why do you want to join the SAPD?[I want to join SAPD because i want to get in the swat team and get to be a better police officer]
## ANSWER ##

I certify that all information is true and correct.[Yes]
## NAME HERE ##

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: [WS]Mike on June 14, 2012, 08:37:16 am

Well, it seems you haven't even filled out any of the required criteria..

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Mircea_Niko on June 14, 2012, 10:35:24 am

Hello Applicant.

I took a look at your application. Sounds good what did you type here, but there are some mistakes, that, in order to the application to be accepted, you must learn them and correct them up. I am here to help you, don't worry.
Firstly, you didn't fill in correctly the requied information.

For example: if you have this question: In Game Name - ##ANSWER HERE##, you must REPLACE, so to select ##ANSWER HERE## with the mouse, to delete it, and put there your name, and will be like this: In Game Name - Crimson_Laceed. Don't worry, it's a normal mistake, that happens to most of new applicants. But by time it will be OK.

Secondly, at the last questions, I mean the: Why do you want to join SAPD etc., make a composition. I mean, like a story. And do not put randomly the answer. Just like upper, REPLACE REPLACE REPLACE. Keep in mind ;) the ##ANSWER HERE## with the response.

Thirdly, you must have at least 120 words written at your composition. Otherwise, you won't get accepted. Or noted.

Fourthly, read ALL the sticky topics, until you learn them. I know in the beginning will be like: Oh it's too long etc. Don't worry! I tough the same. You will finish reading them by minutes.

I wish you good luck with your application. If you need some help, feel free to PM me or other staff member. Need some format help? Visit some applications, look how they did, etc. We are all like brothers here. Remember, need some help? PM US! ;) Good luck with your application!

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Mircea_Niko on June 14, 2012, 10:40:58 am

Oh, one more thing: I suggest you to copy the application format, then to delete your old application, to paste the new format, and fill it up. Keep in mind, REPLACE REPLACE REPLACE ;)

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: W. Harrelson on June 14, 2012, 11:07:22 am

_{Hello applicant. I have to tell you something. Your applications is not god. You will be needed to repair it.}

[iS] Luke Collin

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Lionel Valdes on June 14, 2012, 13:33:38 pm

Hello there!

It seems like you forgot to fill the info! No problem. Just edit the first post, and replace ##ANSWER HERE## with the appropriate informations. And also you seem like you posted the answers directly after the spot, delete those info. And do what I told you in the first place!

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Fred on June 14, 2012, 13:54:06 pm

Applicant, take a look at other applications and check their form.

You need to fill with the correct information in the space saying ##Answer here## deletig that mensage provided by the form and puting your answer.

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Goodandy on June 14, 2012, 14:29:51 pm

Hi there. I hope that you get your application fixed before Daniel or I spawn at our desktops. So, you still have some time to get that fixed. Good luck!

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Huntsman on June 14, 2012, 14:34:44 pm

Delete all the #ANSWER# and #NAME HERE# and then your application should look decent.

Good luck ;)

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Daniel_Bradford on June 14, 2012, 19:25:48 pm

Goodandy is kinda right but seeing you have registered today, I will give you 24 more hours to fix it, despite a lot of players gave you some tips. Read the sticky topics carefully and use the modify button to fix your application.

Also, any questions can be forwarded to my PM box but I won't make you an other gift, if your application is not fixed before the deadline then I will reject it; the rule is the same for everybody.

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Daniel_Bradford on June 14, 2012, 19:26:10 pm

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Notice.

Dear SAPD Applicant,

You have used incorrect formatting to create your application for the San Andreas Police Department.
It is required that you fix this as soon as possible. You may click here (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=24533.0) to get the correct format.
After receiving this warning, you have 24 hours to fix your application.

Signed,

Daniel Bradford
SAPD Academy Management

Title: Re: apply for ARPD
Post by: Daniel_Bradford on June 15, 2012, 18:22:18 pm

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Application Rejected!

Hello Applicant,

I regret to inform you that unfortunately your application has been rejected.
A rejection can have several reasons, the following reason(s) apply to your rejection:

- The application has not been fixed yet...

IMPORTANT: If you do not agree with your rejection and you want to appeal for this, please send a PM towards
Academy Command:
Academy Chief Nexxt (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=829)
Academy Chief Kenny (http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=603)

Signed,

D. Bradford
SAPD Academy Management