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Application:ok i want to join in arpd because is more thinks to do and more works to do
Roleplay Details: ok i rp server you have to chose a caracter and play and in rp is not allow to dm there are a few thinks in rp
Name:tritan_osmani
Age:14
Country of residence:kosova
Are you legal citizen of Argonath[Do you have passport?: yes i em a legal citizen of argonath and i have passport
Do you have a driving license:yes i have
Biography[If you wish you can leave this blank and filll non-rp question "Why do you want to join?"]:
Non-RP Details
IG name:tritan_osmani
Age IRL:14
Playing in server since:i playing in this server like 1 year ago
Playing as cop in server since:when i register in this server i playing as a cop on the first day
Any recent punishments related to your police job:yes 2 punishments
Are you able to use TS/Microphone[This question won't influence outcome of your application in anyway, its matter of information: yes
Why do you want join: because you have more work to do and more thinks to do
Signed by,
[Applicant's signature]
Hey there buddy, it's me, Mircea.
First of all, good luck, you are a good officer, but you have met a problem.
Your application is not correctly realized, and it can be denied.
Therefore, even if I am not really allowed to do that, I am going to help you a bit.
Okay, so, firstly, do not just write at the title: i want to join in arpd. Looks bad, and it's the wrong format. Of course that, if you made an application, you want to join in. By the way, you are applying for SAPD, not ARPD. Therefor, you should write: S.A.P.D. Application | tritan_osmani. So, this must be the title.
Secondly, the bolds and the format itself is totally wrong. Here is the application form you have copied:
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Application
Roleplay Details
Name:
Age:
Country of residence:
Are you legal citizen of Argonath[Do you have passport?]:
Do you have a driving license:
Biography[If you wish you can leave this blank and filll non-rp question "Why do you want to join?"]:
Non-RP Details
IG name:
Age IRL:
Playing in server since:
Playing as cop in server since:
Any recent punishments related to your police job:
Are you able to use TS/Microphone[This question won't influence outcome of your application in anyway, its matter of information]:
Why do you want join:
Signed by,
[Applicant's signature]
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[center][size=18pt][i][b]Application[/b][/i][/size][/center]
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[center][size=14pt][i][b]Roleplay Details[/b][/i][/size][/center]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Country of residence:[/b]
[b]Are you legal citizen of Argonath[/b][size=8pt][i][Do you have passport?][/i][/size][b]:[/b]
[b]Do you have a driving license:[/b]
[b]Biography[/b][size=8pt][i][If you wish you can leave this blank and filll non-rp question "Why do you want to join?"][/i][/size][b]:[/b]
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[center][size=14pt][i][b]Non-RP Details[/b][/i][/size][/center]
[b]IG name:[/b]
[b]Age IRL:[/b]
[b]Playing in server since:[/b]
[b]Playing as cop in server since:[/b]
[b]Any recent punishments related to your police job:[/b]
[b]Are you able to use TS/Microphone[/b][size=8pt][i][This question won't influence outcome of your application in anyway, its matter of information][/i][/size][b]:[/b]
[b]Why do you want join:[/b]
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[size=8pt][i][b]Signed by,
[Applicant's signature][/b][/i][/size]
So, you must press the MODIFY button at your application, and start correcting your mistakes.
First, copy the format I gave to you.
Now, try to fill it in. Again, avoid the bold mistakes. So, I will give you an example of YES and NO.
YES:
IG name: tritan_osmani
Age IRL: 14
etc.
NO:
IG name:tritan_osmani
Age IRL:14
Per short, you have to write the information AFTER the [/b]. After the [/b], remember:
[/b] blablablabla
Your english could be a factor too, but, this can be easily solved. I remember I was the same, I was saying only 3 or 4 words in english. Now, I am speaking english very good, so, you will get used to it. You also have to make some patrol reports. Find them trough the sticky topics.
I can only do this in order to help you. Good luck, you deserve a place in SAPD. I already see your name dark blue :lol:
And I also think that the staff can let you some time to fix this, because there is much work to be done.
Or if neither my tips help you, I have seen many Albanian members in Argonath, so PM them and ask for help if you really need.
Good Luck!
Best wishes, your buddy,
Mircea Niko