Argonath RPG Police Department
GTA: San Andreas => SA:MP Application Desk => SAPD Information Center => Rejected Applications => Topic started by: Vanessa on May 03, 2010, 09:07:55 am
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Ingame Nickname AND Character Name (warning, see point #9 of application rules):
Vanessa_Kingz =AV=Vanessa
Real-Life Age AND Ingame Age:
Real-life: 16
Ingame: 21
How long have you played on Argonath RPG:
4-5 months
How long have you played as a cop:
Almost all the time. I almost can't remember when I was offduty.
Are you a United States of Argonath Citizen (do you have a passport)?:
Yes, since I played seven days.
Do you have a driver's license (issued by driving school)?:
Yes, I'm also Los Santos Driving School Full Teacher.
Have you read all "SAPD Police Procedures" topics?
Yes.
Are you able to use TeamSpeak (no microphone needed):
Yes.
Have you been an SAPD member before? (cadet or above):
No.
If yes, explain your previous rank in SAPD, did you resign, rejected or fired?
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Had an previous application that go rejected? (add link to old application):
No.
Why do you want to join San Andreas Police Department (minimum of 3 sentence):
That's a long story, I'll just begin at the begin:
First I was in LS and did normal things as chasing suspects, traffic stops and routine checks.
I won a lotto, and moved to Tierra Robada/Bone Country. There the big story began. I patrolled whole days in Tierra and Bone and met up with the local people there. The people there were really nice to me. I decided to stay there. I bought a house at the water on walk distance from El Quebrados. I came every day at the Sheriff department in El Quebrados, and I liked the place. Since then I met up every day with the local people in Bone Country and Tierra Robada, and I decided for myself that I would do every thing to become Sheriff of El Quebrados. I spoke with the local people about my plan, and they would support me. A day I saw a advertise about a training in Dillimore. I went to Dillimore to do the training and there I met Bert Karlsson. I did the training very well, and passed it. After the training I spoke with him. I told him about my plans and he said he would support me in it. I was really happy that there were many people who would support me in my plans. A while after this meeting, I met Chief Pancher at Los Santos PD. We patrolled together and we did that a few times more. I also told him about my plans, and he said that when there are facatures to become Sheriff of El Quebrados the chance is there that I can become it. That made me really happy because that was great to hear.
Report:
Saturday 18th.
Bayside Weedfield.
2.10 PM - 3.00 PM
I heard something about a drugsdealer at Bayside Weedfield, I drove with my cillivian car to El Quebrados Sheriff Department, went onduty and took a PD rancher.
I drove to Bayside, and saw a man at the weed grow place. I stopped and arrested him.
After an investigation and frisk I found 95 grams of heroin and 50 grams of weed.
the drugs are gaven to TeaM_GiacJr.
Sunday 19th.
Rusty ville, Tierra Robada/Bone Country.
4.50 PM - 5.30 PM
I drove onduty with a El Quebrados PD rancher to Rusty ville to meet up with the local people.
There was nobody in the town, but in a moment I saw a car driving on the mountain near to the town.
I drove to the side of the mountain and I saw the car stopping and a man stepped out. I drove to him. When I was at the man, I saw he had a Sheriff star on his blouse. I talked with him, and we decided to Co-operate with eachother. he told me that the town members where in the desert, he brought me to them, and I spoke with some members of the town. Nice guys and they would support me in my plan to try to become Sheriff of El Quebrados.
I decided with them to come every day to Rusty ville to meet them, and ask how it's going in the town. This is good to make relations with them and try to become friends with them. That will have effect on how lawfull they will be in the future.
Monday 3th.
San Fierro - Los Santos
8.14 AM - 10.01 AM
It was in the morning, and I was driving to my work.
When I was almost there I recived a phone call from Sergeant Gecko.
He told me there was a Code 30 in Ganton, Los Santos.
I placed the siren on my car roof and speeded to the San Fierro Police Department.
When I was there, Sergeant Gecko was already waiting for me.
I hopped into his car, and we speeded to Ganton, Los Santos.
When we arrived there, we saw it was one big chaos.
A-lot of cops were already there, and every second were gunshots hearable.
We jumped out of our car, and took cover behind it. I looked around and in a moment I saw the solution!
I told Sergeant Gecko, "I run around that place, and bust them from behind!", Sergeant Gecko thought it was a risk idea, but he gave me the chance to do it carefully.
I reloaded my weapon and checked if everything was fine. Then I ran to the left and ran to a house. I saw a nigger on the roof, and told him to surrender, he turned his back and attempted to aim his weapon on me, But I was first, I shot a bullet in his arm.
I thought he would understand I had more power on that moment, but he didn't think about it, and used all his last power to attempt the aim again, I shot him through his hearth. I was in a shock for a moment, but then I climbed up the roof. I made a sign to Sergeant Gecko, so he could sturm in with his man. On the same time as he sturmed I jumped of the roof. I took cover behind a car from the criminals, and aimed from the hood. I saw a man with an AK-47 aiming on Sergeant Gecko and I thought "this is not going to end good." I lay'd my finger on the trigger and shouted him to stop! He didn't hear me ofcourse because there were to many gunshots. I pulled the trigger, and the bullet reaches his head. While he fell down his AK-47 shot some bullets in the air. I was in a shock about all the things what happened. After this Ganton was clear. Sergeant Gecko came to me, and said "Let's go to". We went back to the San Fierro Police Department and we made a report about what happened.
Monday 3th.
Los Santos - Marina and Idlewood
3 PM - 3.35 PM
I was patrolling trough Los Santos and I was hungry. I drove to the local Burgershot and parked my car. I stepped out of my PD car and went inside the burgershot. I reported into the Police radio that I was about to take a break and walked up to the friendly man at the desk. I ordered a Sprunk and two fries. After a small three minutes my drink and food was ready and I took it away on a plate. I walked to the last table in the left corner. I sitted down and started eating. While I was eating I grabbed my PDA from my pocket. I went to the newspage and read some news, after I went to the "Police tips" forum. I fast looked trew some pages and my eye fell on a special word. I saw the next sentence:
"Drugsdealer seen around Idlewood motel".
So I closed my PDA and layd some money on the table, I grabbed my jacket and ran out of the Burgershot. I ran back to my car and stepped in. I reported into the Police radio about what I founded. I told them to standby and I would check out the case. I drove to the motel and saw a man with a blunt in his mouth. I already thought this would be the man, but an citizen came to me and pointed at that man, he whispered to me "That's the man".
I told him oke thanks and said to him he must leave now because it could be dangerous. I walked up to the drugsdealer and said him to put his hands in the air carefully and slowly. He refuses and attempted to run away. But he failed because I saw it happen, i made a jump to the ground and tackled him with my left leg. He fell down at the ground and I jumped on his back. He attempted to run away again and it successed. The only thing I could do was grabbing his bagpack. I grabbed his bagpack and I successed to take it. He thought three seconds to fight back to get his bagpack back or run away and get out of the hands of the cops.He decided to do the last and he ran away. I standed up from the ground and started a chasing after him. He used to be a good Free-Runner and it it took him any long to lose me. The only thing I got was his bagpack, that was what I thought. But when I opened it I saw there was inside a bag with weed, and a name-plate with the name Crazy Dzimny on it. When I arrived at the PD I made the conclusion that the bag a weight of 123 grams contained.
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I have seen this applicant in action,she acts VERY professional every time I see her. I recommend[/color] her.
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I also recommend her, she's a great RPer, and one that sticks to her role.
Good luck, Vanessa!
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Good luck.
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Thank you guys :-)
sarah?
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Good luck :) Seen you on duty, Great RP'er hope you make it :) Your recommended for Officer :)
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I have seen patrolled with this applicants before opening of academy, she has so much potential that she could easily become an officer, I look forward to train her.
Signed,
Sergeant Fawkes.
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Supported by me :)
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:P
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Good luck :) Seen you on duty, Great RP'er hope you make it :) Your recommended for Officer :)
Thank you very much ;-)
I have seen patrolled with this applicants before opening of academy, she has so much potential that she could easily become an officer, I look forward to train her.
Signed,
Sergeant Fawkes.
I'm either looking forwards to get trained by you :D
I cant wait to become Cadet or Officer :D:DSupported by me :)
Thanks
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Welcome :)
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Great application and reports if you are doing your job also so professional then you will be an officer in no time.
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Good luck Vanessa, Recommended ofc !!
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Great application and reports if you are doing your job also so professional then you will be an officer in no time.
I have a-lot more reports, but I lost them somehow on my Pc.
I had reports till the day of today :P
But I'll make new reports tonight, I made threw alot today :P
Thanks for all the nice reply's I really appriciate it ;)
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Please use the correct application format.
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Updated, Vince.
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Report:
Monday 3th.
San Fierro - Los Santos
8.14 AM - 10.01 AM
It was in the morning, and I was driving to my work.
When I was almost there I recived a phone call from Sergeant Gecko.
He told me there was a Code 30 in Ganton, Los Santos.
I placed the siren on my car roof and speeded to the San Fierro Police Department.
When I was there, Sergeant Gecko was already waiting for me.
I hopped into his car, and we speeded to Ganton, Los Santos.
When we arrived there, we saw it was one big chaos.
A-lot of cops were already there, and every second were gunshots hearable.
We jumped out of our car, and took cover behind it. I looked around and in a moment I saw the solution!
I told Sergeant Gecko, "I run around that place, and bust them from behind!", Sergeant Gecko thought it was a risk idea, but he gave me the chance to do it carefully.
I reloaded my weapon and checked if everything was fine. Then I ran to the left and ran to a house. I saw a nigger on the roof, and told him to surrender, he turned his back and attempted to aim his weapon on me, But I was first, I shot a bullet in his arm.
I thought he would understand I had more power on that moment, but he didn't think about it, and used all his last power to attempt the aim again, I shot him through his hearth. I was in a shock for a moment, but then I climbed up the roof. I made a sign to Sergeant Gecko, so he could sturm in with his man. On the same time as he sturmed I jumped of the roof. I took cover behind a car from the criminals, and aimed from the hood. I saw a man with an AK-47 aiming on Sergeant Gecko and I thought "this is not going to end good." I lay'd my finger on the trigger and shouted him to stop! He didn't hear me ofcourse because there were to many gunshots. I pulled the trigger, and the bullet reaches his head. While he fell down his AK-47 shot some bullets in the air. I was in a shock about all the things what happened. After this Ganton was clear. Sergeant Gecko came to me, and said "Let's go to". We went back to the San Fierro Police Department and we made a report about what happened.
Updated
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Very nice job Vanessa, I have a feeling that you'll get accepted soon. ;)
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Good luck :) Seen you on duty, Great RP'er hope you make it :) Your recommended for Officer :)
Dude i think only SAPD memebers can say recommended =)
And good luck Vanessa.
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Very nice job Vanessa, I have a feeling that you'll get accepted soon. ;)
Thanks. :D
That would be really nice.
Btw, I'll make a new report today, busted around 120 grams of weed.
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Good luck Vanessa :)
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Good luck Vanessa :)
Thank you twenty :D
You to!
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Report update.
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Report:
Monday 3th.
Los Santos - Marina and Idlewood
3 PM - 3.35 PM
I was patrolling trough Los Santos and I was hungry. I drove to the local Burgershot and parked my car. I stepped out of my PD car and went inside the burgershot. I reported into the Police radio that I was about to take a break and walked up to the friendly man at the desk. I ordered a Sprunk and two fries. After a small three minutes my drink and food was ready and I took it away on a plate. I walked to the last table in the left corner. I sitted down and started eating. While I was eating I grabbed my PDA from my pocket. I went to the newspage and read some news, after I went to the "Police tips" forum. I fast looked trew some pages and my eye fell on a special word. I saw the next sentence:
"Drugsdealer seen around Idlewood motel".
So I closed my PDA and layd some money on the table, I grabbed my jacket and ran out of the Burgershot. I ran back to my car and stepped in. I reported into the Police radio about what I founded. I told them to standby and I would check out the case. I drove to the motel and saw a man with a blunt in his mouth. I already thought this would be the man, but an citizen came to me and pointed at that man, he whispered to me "That's the man".
I told him oke thanks and said to him he must leave now because it could be dangerous. I walked up to the drugsdealer and said him to put his hands in the air carefully and slowly. He refuses and attempted to run away. But he failed because I saw it happen, i made a jump to the ground and tackled him with my left leg. He fell down at the ground and I jumped on his back. He attempted to run away again and it successed. The only thing I could do was grabbing his bagpack. I grabbed his bagpack and I successed to take it. He thought three seconds to fight back to get his bagpack back or run away and get out of the hands of the cops.He decided to do the last and he ran away. I standed up from the ground and started a chasing after him. He used to be a good Free-Runner and it it took him any long to lose me. The only thing I got was his bagpack, that was what I thought. But when I opened it I saw there was inside a bag with weed, and a name-plate with the name Crazy Dzimny on it. When I arrived at the PD I made the conclusion that the bag a weight of 123 grams contained.
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I saw a nigger
Don't use such terms. Other than that, this was successful, as a conclusion, I would advise you to think of more tactical assault in order you do not lose health quickly
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I saw a nigger
Don't use such terms. Other than that, this was successful, as a conclusion, I would advise you to think of more tactical assault in order you do not lose health quickly
Uhhmmm.. I didn't use the term "Nigger" right? Or I can't see it..
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And new report will show up tonight. :-)
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Good cop seen you around, hope you get cadet :)
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. I saw a nigger with an AK-47 aiming on Sergeant Gecko
Yes You did say that please refrain from that kind of language.
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:rofl:
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. I saw a nigger with an AK-47 aiming on Sergeant Gecko
Yes You did say that please refrain from that kind of language.
oh now I see.
I'm so sorry..
It was really really not ment to offend someone. I was so busy with writing that I typed that down.
I hope I didn't make someone angry, if yes, my excuse for it.
And again, it wasn't ment to discriminate anyone.
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She is a good driver, made it on top of MtChilliad without tires
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She is a good driver, made it on top of MtChilliad without tires
That's not the only thing she's good at :) :) :)
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That's not the only thing she's good at :) :) :)
You made it sound like she gave you a blow.
Anyway, I got some pictures of you flaming today, I doubt it's needed to post them, but if you want me, I can.
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That's not the only thing she's good at :) :) :)
You made it sound like she gave you a blow.
Anyway, I got some pictures of you flaming today, I doubt it's needed to post them, but if you want me, I can.
Niko is just funning around...
And about that flaming, I guess you mean "LOL" "NOOB" in the mainchat.
That was ment for /cb and that wasn't ment as flaming at all.
You may ask Dark_Phoenix.
I was with him in a channel and we were funning and ramming around at LVAP because we both were bored.
He drove on top speed and I tried to ram him. He avoided it and typed "PWNT" in the channel.
Two secs after it he rammed with top speed on a tree. The following words were ment for the CB channel but landed in the mainchat. And Dark called hisself "noob" either in the CB channel and I only repeated his words and we had really fun at all. So noany flaming.
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Well, you managed to do the same mistake twice ;)
"f**k you" and "noob" ;p
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Well, you managed to do the same mistake twice ;)
"f**k you" and "noob" ;p
Those words were meant for me while i was offline :( :(, anyways, she makes a lot of fails, so I hope that doesn't screw up her app, she's a leet person :) Recommended ofc
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Good luck! ;)
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"f**k you"
Srsly? :O
that must be a fail.
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Yup, like i said she is 100% Fail-A-Lot.
That's not the only thing she's good at :) :) :)
You made it sound like she gave you a blow.
That's not what i meant btw :neutral:
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Keep this application FREE of arguments.
Sergeant,
Fawkes.
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Keep this application FREE of arguments.
Sergeant,
Fawkes.
hihihi :)
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Hey this girl is good at the job. Actually she is great at every thing she does. I had the opportunity to see her work a couple times enough to know that she is a good officer and I recommend her 100% for the job.
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Hey this girl is good at the job. Actually she is great at every thing she does. I had the opportunity to see her work a couple times enough to know that she is a good officer and I recommend her 100% for the job.
well..
Thank you very much.
I apreciate this :cop:
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Welcome :)
Please keep forum spam to a minumum Nicholes.
Good luck Vanessa, everyone has high hopes for you it seems.
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Welcome :)
Please keep forum spam to a minumum Nicholes.
Good luck Vanessa, everyone has high hopes for you it seems.
That's nice to hear :cop:
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Just for an improving TIP; Try to role-play with criminals more often, try keeping guns lower at all possible costs, unless your life is in danger. I have patrolled with you often, and I conclude that criminals get a bit annoyed and may retaliate if you start aiming a weapon to their face if they're idle, if this skill is worked on, you'll improve greatly, also now, start investigating and such, just to gain experience, and run down to Fort carson now and again, and practice shooting skills on the training ground there.
Hope it'll help,
Sergeant Fawkes.
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This is an interest test. If you are still interested in the force, reply here within 4 days. Failing to reply will result in your Application being rejected.
Signed,
DPD Captain
Giac Junior
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I'm still interested =)
I was for a few days not online, my internet was broke.
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This is an interest test. If you are still interested in the force, reply here within 4 days. Failing to reply will result in your Application being rejected.
Signed,
DPD Captain
Giac Junior
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DENIED after your actions today Mr. Clifton Banks............ feel free to re-apply after ONE MONTH
If misunderstanding PM me..