i want to join in arpd

[tritanii123]

Application:ok i want to join in arpd because is more thinks to do and more works to do

Roleplay Details: ok i rp server you have to chose a caracter and play and in rp is not allow to dm there are a few thinks in rp

Name:tritan_osmani

Age:14

Country of residence:kosova

Are you legal citizen of Argonath[Do you have passport?: yes i em a legal citizen of argonath and i have passport

Do you have a driving license:yes i have

Biography[If you wish you can leave this blank and filll non-rp question "Why do you want to join?"]:

Non-RP Details

IG name:tritan_osmani

Age IRL:14

Playing in server since:i playing in this server like 1 year ago

Playing as cop in server since:when i register in this server i playing as a cop on the first day

Any recent punishments related to your police job:yes 2 punishments

Are you able to use TS/Microphone[This question won't influence outcome of your application in anyway, its matter of information: yes

Why do you want join: because you have more work to do and more thinks to do

Signed by,
[Applicant's signature]

[Omar Aly]

Erhm.. you application has a couple of problems. Please look at others and figure about what's wrong with yours.

[Ben]

Good luck sir, I'm sure you'd be a good addition to the SAPD.
As Omar said, just fix your application and you will be well on your way.

[KhornateMonkey]

[gmod]If you dont have a reason to post here then dont, you can keep your jokes to yourself. It aint general discussion topic.[/gmod]

[Killer]

Good Luck Bro !

[Tom Adams]

You have 24 hours to fix the application or it will be denied.

[Huntsman]

Hello Tritan, you're a great officer but you won't get in just like that. First of all you have to use the official application format. You can find it by reading throughout the sticky topics.
Then you need to fix your application title, you can see how to do that in the sticky topics as well.

Good luck and fix your application before it got denied 

[Mircea_Niko]

   Hey there buddy, it's me, Mircea.
   First of all, good luck, you are a good officer, but you have met a problem.
   Your application is not correctly realized, and it can be denied.
   Therefore, even if I am not really allowed to do that, I am going to help you a bit.
   Okay, so, firstly, do not just write at the title: i want to join in arpd. Looks bad, and it's the wrong format. Of course that, if you made an application, you want to join in. By the way, you are applying for SAPD, not ARPD. Therefor, you should write: S.A.P.D. Application | tritan_osmani. So, this must be the title.
   Secondly, the bolds and the format itself is totally wrong. Here is the application form you have copied:

 

Application

Roleplay Details

Name:

Age:

Country of residence:

Are you legal citizen of Argonath[Do you have passport?]:

Do you have a driving license:

Biography[If you wish you can leave this blank and filll non-rp question "Why do you want to join?"]:

Non-RP Details

IG name:

Age IRL:

Playing in server since:

Playing as cop in server since:

Any recent punishments related to your police job:

Are you able to use TS/Microphone[This question won't influence outcome of your application in anyway, its matter of information]:

Why do you want join:

Signed by,
[Applicant's signature]

Code: [Select]

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[center][size=18pt][i][b]Application[/b][/i][/size][/center]

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[center][size=14pt][i][b]Roleplay Details[/b][/i][/size][/center]

[b]Name:[/b]

[b]Age:[/b]

[b]Country of residence:[/b]

[b]Are you legal citizen of Argonath[/b][size=8pt][i][Do you have passport?][/i][/size][b]:[/b]

[b]Do you have a driving license:[/b]

[b]Biography[/b][size=8pt][i][If you wish you can leave this blank and filll non-rp question "Why do you want to join?"][/i][/size][b]:[/b]

[hr]

[center][size=14pt][i][b]Non-RP Details[/b][/i][/size][/center]

[b]IG name:[/b]

[b]Age IRL:[/b]

[b]Playing in server since:[/b]

[b]Playing as cop in server since:[/b]

[b]Any recent punishments related to your police job:[/b]

[b]Are you able to use TS/Microphone[/b][size=8pt][i][This question won't influence outcome of your application in anyway, its matter of information][/i][/size][b]:[/b]

[b]Why do you want join:[/b]

[hr]
[size=8pt][i][b]Signed by,
[Applicant's signature][/b][/i][/size]
   So, you must press the MODIFY button at your application, and start correcting your mistakes.
   First, copy the format I gave to you.
   Now, try to fill it in. Again, avoid the bold mistakes. So, I will give you an example of YES and NO.

   YES:

IG name: tritan_osmani

Age IRL: 14

etc.

   NO:

IG name:tritan_osmani

Age IRL:14

   Per short, you have to write the information AFTER the [/b]. After the [/b], remember:

[/b] blablablabla

   Your english could be a factor too, but, this can be easily solved. I remember I was the same, I was saying only 3 or 4 words in english. Now, I am speaking english very good, so, you will get used to it. You also have to make some patrol reports. Find them trough the sticky topics.

   I can only do this in order to help you. Good luck, you deserve a place in SAPD. I already see your name dark blue 

   And I also think that the staff can let you some time to fix this, because there is much work to be done.

   Or if neither my tips help you, I have seen many Albanian members in Argonath, so PM them and ask for help if you really need.

   Good Luck!
   Best wishes, your buddy,
      Mircea Niko

   

[Def Perry]

Greetings Tritan. With regards, we are hereby informing you that your application is denied. The reasons for your denial are: - Failure to edit application to the correct format. Note: N/A. You may re-apply after 1 week. Signed by, Def Perry S.A.P.D. Command