[Denied] LCPD Application: [COP]Ramiro

[ramirogarza]

Application of [COP]Ramiro

1. In-game nickname and RP name: [COP]Ramiro; Ramiro Garza

2. Former names: Canon XL2..Ramiro0412..i think the admins delete those names

3. RL-Age and In-game Age: 16; 25

4. How long have you been playing on Argonath RPG?: I played before in Argonath, but I do not remember the nickname that i had.
That was about 1 year .. Now i have since july 19 playing ..everyday ...like 4 hours..and i am learning a lot

5. Do you posses an US of Argonath passport and a driver's license?: I have license and passport.

6. Do you have any previous experience as an officer? If "yes", where?: Well of course ..in the time that i have in argonath...i think like all the days i get up and play on this server...to help my patrol friends catching the suspects..and keeping the laws in ArgonathRPG

7. Are you currently part of any other law enforcement group or department in Argonath?: No

8. Do you understand the Police Laws and Procedures?: Yes

9. Have you been denied or resigned before? If "yes", why?: I havent been denied or resigned

10. Why do you want to join the LCPD?: Because i fell that i can do a change in the city....keeping the order in the city and respecting the laws and rules

Signed,
[COP]Ramiro

[Edison]

Heya,

Use the correct form and read through sticky topics!

[cokeinmynose]

Hey Ramiro,

Good Luck with ur application but fix ur apply its a bit messy u know.
If u dont know how, check this topic http://arpd.argonathrpg.com/forum/index.php?topic=18815.0 and paste the Code in ur Post, and Not the Example of the Application.

Regards,
Coke

[George MacHawk]

Dear Mr. Ramiro,

You already got instructions. Please edit your application as soon as possible.

Ps. There is not such thing as "Bonus material" - please remove it.

Sincerely,
Chief MacHawk
LCPD Commands Staff

[cokeinmynose]

Dear Mr. Ramiro,

You already got instructions. Please edit your application as soon as possible.

Ps. There is not such thing as "Bonus material" - please remove it.

Sincerely,
Chief MacHawk
LCPD Commands Staff

Ramiro, The "Bonus material" you could put that story on:

6. Do you have any previous experience as an officer?

And then say like: Yes, i always protected the law and citizens in Liberty City and would now like to work with Liberty City Police Department (LCPD).

anyway, something like this and do not copy this in urs, im just giving u a tip what would make ur apply more interesting/good.

Regards,

Coke

[ramirogarza]

Sorry for my bad post

[Leroy Kolta]

Everybody makes mistakes. It's just a matter of fixing them and making the best out of it.
Good luck.

[Heller.]

Good Luck

[Charles F. Offdensen]

Hello Ramiro,

I am glad to see you here, but the application still contains some errors. Please review all the sticky topics and eventually compare your application with another one.

Regards,
Petr 'Kerbe' Latch

[George MacHawk]

Please fill point 2 and clarify point 4 because it was not really clear for us since when you are playing IV:MP.

Sincerely,
Chief MacHawk
LCPD Command Staff

[ramirogarza]

EDITED*

[George MacHawk]

Thank you for doing so. Now please start reporting your daily activity as police officer with the format below:

Code: [Select]

[img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/8514/apppatrolreport.png[/img]

[font=georgia][shadow=black,bottom]Date:[/shadow][/font]
[i](mm/dd/yy)[/i]

[font=georgia][shadow=black,bottom]Suspects killed and/or apprehended:[/shadow][/font]
[i](Reason for killing/apprehending them)[/i]

[font=georgia][shadow=black,bottom]Traffic stops conducted:[/shadow][/font]
[i](Reasons and number of fined civilians)[/i]

[font=georgia][shadow=black,bottom]Patrol time:[/shadow][/font]
[i](And/if any patrol partners involved (Names))[/i]

[font=georgia][shadow=black,bottom]Incidents:[/shadow][/font]
[i](Incidents that occurred during the patrol. Include extensive descriptions and/or images/evidence preferably) [/i]       

[font=georgia][shadow=black,bottom]Conclusion:[/shadow][/font]
[i](Write a short conclusion about your duty day)[/i]

[font=georgia][shadow=black,bottom][i]Signed,[/i][/shadow][/font]
[i]NAME[/i]

Good luck,
Chief MacHawk
LCPD Command Staff

[George MacHawk]

Denied,

You were banned from the server, rulebreaking is not tolerated in LCPD. If you have future plans for reapplying please be sure in what you are doing. I highly suggest you to spend more time as free cop and get used to the life in Liberty City before that.

Signed,
Chief MacHawk
LCPD Command Staff