[SAPD Application] MrViolence

[EagleEye.]

SAPD Applicant: MrViolence

Roleplay Details

Name (First, Mi(if any), Last): MrViolence

Gender: Male

Date of Birth (mm/dd/year): 28/11/1990

Phone number: 998644

Country of residence (City, State(LS-LV-SF), Country): Los Santos

Are you a lawful citizen of United States of Argonath?:  Yes iam.

Do you have a valid state driver license?: Yes i do.

Autobiography (One hundred words minimum): When Lebron(Violence) was young he wishes to be like his dad an Police Officer,
his dad was from the best Police officer in his City,
he wanted to work like his father and be like him and got respect from all the people,
years passed and his father killed in a Revolution,
Lebron continued his School and then joined the Police academy and learned there how to use Weapons and fighting the Criminals and driving, and when he graduated,
and then, he returned back to home,
and looks at the box of all his Family memories and looking at his father's photo and crying as he missed him so much,
then, he heared the news on the TV about the Criminals who killed his dad,
he wanted to kill them but the Government already did,
now he started to train to be a Cop in his City.

Non-RP Details

IG Name: MrViolence

Previous names: MrViolence

Argonath forum profile: http://www.argonathrpg.eu/index.php?action=profile

Age IRL: 16

What is your current timezone?: (GMT)+2

Joined the server (mm/year):  5/2013

Started law enforcement duty since (month,year): Not Yet

Any punishments related to your law enforcement job within the last 2 months?: Nah.

Are you able to use TS/Microphone?: Yea, Skype : nader.eltaib13

Do you agree to follow SAPD Rules and Regulations and the Argonath Constitution?: Yes i do, Ofcource

Are you able to follow the chain of command and take orders from superiors when required?: Yes i am.

Do you have any specific skills and/or previous experience with any law enforcement agencies?: Yes i DO have specific skills, and im just Experienced in Cop Duty.

Why do you wish to continue progressing in the SAPD? (One hundred words minimum): Cuz, i wish i can be a Part of the San Andreas Police Department,
i want to catch the criminals and stop the crime as iam Experienced,
i know how to use weapons and when,
im good in Driving and chasing the Criminals,
i can be a good cop, i have a good RP skills,
i can Handle it very well as i will be more active when i join ,
i will be more interested to join the game,
i now have only 1 server in my Favorites list and its only ArgonathRPG,
i wish i get accepted, thats all.



Signed,
MrViolence

[David Gonzalez]

Please go through your application, specialy the autobiography and the very last question. Fix the many grammatical mistakes in them.

[EagleEye.]

I still dont know what you want me to do, Now?

[Lionel Valdes]

Hello MrViolence, your application appears decent overall. However, my first recommendation is that you form a block (wall) of text using the sentences you have in the autobiography and last question, so it looks more like a paragraph. My other recommendation is that you go through all your answers and change terms that are very informal; example: 'Nah', 'Cuz'.

Reply back once you have done so. 

Best regards.

[David Gonzalez]

Greetings MrViolence After reviewing your eligibility to pursue in the SAPD, we regret to inform you that your application has been denied. The reasons for your denial are: - Lack of interest. - Lack of effort towards the application. Note: None. Signed by, Celso Williams SAPD Sergeant 22/09/2015 Personnel Management Staff