SAPD:Laurent_Willis

[Laurent_Willis]

Ingame Nickname AND Character Name (warning, see point #9 of application rules): Laurent12
Real-Life Age AND Ingame Age: Real Life : 13 Ingame: 16
How long have you played on Argonath RPG: 2 days
How long have you played as a cop: 2 days
Are you a United States of Argonath Citizen (do you have a passport)?: not yet
Do you have a driver's license (issued by driving school)?: not yet ( i have to wait for the passport first 7 days.)
Have you read all "SAPD Police Procedures" topics?: Yes
Have you been an SAPD member before? (cadet or above): yes
If yes, explain your previous rank in SAPD, did you resign, rejected or fired? : i use to be an SAPD on another server i started with officer and i have been promoted loads of times till i became an FBI.. So i have experience
Had an previous application that go rejected? (add link to old application): No
Why do you want to join San Andreas Police Department (minimum of 3 sentence): Because i have experience(i hope my age wont affect) and i want to help the team with all my heart and never ever let down an mate or shoot one of them i will always help them with all what i can do and i want to join because i like to play samp a lot in my free time so.. this is my little hobby you could say  i hope someday i will be a part of the team.

I Laurent12 swear to help and protect my teammates in any problem and never give up !
I know i am playing as an cop only for 2 days but all what i want is help the community!
And maybe some of  you will say that  i grew weed but no!!  i tried but i didnt because i find out that is illegal ! I swear it won't repeat.
And i know i have to do it after 7 days of playing and i am really really really sorry but i want in this team! i really want in it! i want to be a part of the community .
Thank You Laurent12

[Erickk]

Good Luck Laurent
There is 5 errors you should fix.I don't know if am allowed to tell,its Vince & Boozman job

[Laurent_Willis]

I don't really find my errors... and i think it is because i am new here ... ure right i shouldn't apply right now i am sorry .. i dunno what was in my mind!  

[Davis]

I don't really find my errors... and i think it is because i am new here ... ure right i shouldn't apply right now i am sorry .. i dunno what was in my mind!  

Well, Please dont Cry.
I can tell you Some things about your application.

1.if you even read the Sticky Topics, you should know that Smilies isnt allowed.
2.Upper command was one of errors.
3. You could get more experience by training knowledge of codes like i did.

[Laurent_Willis]

So what if i have those errors i still wont give up on this ! i still have hope that i'll be accepted. Thank you very very very much for the advice and errors Davis thanx mate.

[Davis]

So what if i have those errors i still wont give up on this ! i still have hope that i'll be accepted. Thank you very very very much for the advice and errors Davis thanx mate.

Thanks Is Enough.

[Erickk]

First sentence errror still, Luarent12 and another name like Example: Luarent_Baker or Luarent_Murphy

[Laurent_Willis]

nobody is answering with yes or no? ??

[[Rstar]Vince]

Clear inactivity for two weeks. Denied.