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Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
« Reply #9 on: May 26, 2012, 20:59:55 pm »

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Offline Zing

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[INCT] SAPD Application | Zing
« on: May 22, 2012, 03:24:22 am »
    Zing
    Status: Application Approved!



    Personal Information:

    Ingame Nickname:
    Zing

    Forumname:
    Zing

    Previous names:
    Zing, Zing_RivosecchiT  ,   Zing_Rivosecchi

    Age (ingame and in real-life):
    18/21

    What is your timezone?:
    GMT+1




    General Information:

    What is your registration date on Argonath RPG? (/whenmade)?:
    26th April, 2012 (but i play in argo since 2009 to 2011 with another acocunt and loosed info :s)

    What is your ingame phonenumber?:
    dont remember

    Do you have a license and passport?:
    Yes/Yes

    Do you frequently get warned ingame? (by admins or higher ranked cops):
    Yes (abused)

    Have you been (cop)banned before? If yes, please explain the bans (including copbans):
    i dont remember but i think yes (in the first day on my joining)

    How long do you play a day?:
    the whole day im trynig to get Rp'ing from others , im playing like 18 h per day and +

    Do you have any difficulties with the English language?:
    Yes, (not english men)



    SAPD Information:

    Have you read all SAPD Police Procedures?:
    Yes

    Do you agree with the Application Rules?:
    Yes

    Have you ever been in the SAPD before? If you have, why did you leave?:
    No

    Have you ever applied to the SAPD before and got denied? If yes, please provide the link of your old application:
    No

    Please write down in atleast 150 words..
    • ..what would make you a good officer?
    • ..what experience do you have on law enforcement groups?
    • ..why do you want to join the SAPD?

    For now, im just a freecop, who trying the best to keep argonath safe from criminals, i want to serve and protect all civilians,
    im trying to have some Rp in my duty, this is why i want to join SAPD to play with RP'ing.
    since 2009 i was a freecop.
    i want to join SAPD to help Others SAPD officer, to catch Su with rp'ing , if fail to rp with me, ill try my best (Shooting wheel only) to get him /gu
    and by getting in the SAPD team, ill get chance to learn more how to Rp with other cops, i want to get a chance to proof my self to others, i love to do team work, and i dream all time about be cop in the real life, i wish that im accepted in the SAPD to proof that i can give my best to ge Argonath with no criminel by helpin others SAPD Officers and high rankers, and why not by learning with u, ill be FBI or SWAT ^^
    i forget, i take all things  seriously when im on duty, so You Su, watch out, Im coming for u
     


    I certify that all information is true and correct.
    Zing

    Offline Robbs

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    Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
    « Reply #1 on: May 22, 2012, 12:25:16 pm »
    I know I'm not a high ranked officer or someone who does this, but you have the wrong things, replace the ##NAMEHERE## with Zing_Rivosecchi, and where it says reply with at least 150 words, try to add a little more.
    Robbs, EX Argoradio DJ, and SAMP Moderator Applicant
    Credit To Aca. For The Awesome Siggy and Avatar!

    Offline Zing

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    Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
    « Reply #2 on: May 22, 2012, 15:13:24 pm »

    Offline Daniel_Bradford

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    Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
    « Reply #3 on: May 22, 2012, 18:03:05 pm »





    Welcome Applicant!


    You have applied for San Andreas Police Department under SA:MP.
    We hope you can wait patiently, whilst we make a decision about your application.
    Please look into making patrol reports, as it may help you get accepted faster, as it shows your in game activity!

    Notes: 2 words are missing in your essay. Also fix the grammar of it ... By the way, are you really playing 18 hours a day ?

    Signed,


    Daniel Bradford
    SAPD Academy Management

    Offline Zing

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    Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
    « Reply #4 on: May 22, 2012, 23:59:02 pm »

    Notes: 2 words are missing in your essay. Also fix the grammar of it ... By the way, are you really playing 18 hours a day ?

    Yes sir ! i play 18 hours in day, i sleep just between 5 to 6 hours in 1 day, all time im logged on, if im not in argonath, its mean im in the street with freinds,,,
    (i have one year with no work and ill be done in 16/07/2012 after this date ill come just 5 hours in argo)
    ill try my best to fix the grammar but like i notice, im not English men, i can talk frensh and arabic, but english im 2/10.

    Offline Daniel_Bradford

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    Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
    « Reply #5 on: May 23, 2012, 14:13:41 pm »
    Still 1 word missing, fix it before 18h.

    Il te manque toujours 1 mot dans ton travail de rédaction, fais attention de bien lire les règles dans les topics en haut de page de cette section. Tu as jusque 18h aujourd'hui pour corriger ta lettre de motivation.

    Offline Zing

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    Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
    « Reply #6 on: May 23, 2012, 19:19:23 pm »
    Still 1 word missing, fix it before 18h.

    Il te manque toujours 1 mot dans ton travail de rédaction, fais attention de bien lire les règles dans les topics en haut de page de cette section. Tu as jusque 18h aujourd'hui pour corriger ta lettre de motivation.


    Sorry sir i was late :s connection problem
    je vais voir se que je peut ajouter ^^

    Offline Daniel_Bradford

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    Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
    « Reply #7 on: May 23, 2012, 20:09:18 pm »





    Welcome Applicant!


    You have applied for San Andreas Police Department under SA:MP.
    We hope you can wait patiently, whilst we make a decision about your application.
    Please look into making patrol reports, as it may help you get accepted faster, as it shows your in game activity!


    Signed,


    D. Bradford
    SAPD Academy Management

    Offline Zing

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    Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
    « Reply #8 on: May 24, 2012, 13:11:23 pm »
      Patrol Report


      Date: 22/05/2012

      Length: 6 hours


      Patrol Partner(s): [MI]Arthur_K, [SACS]TinMan[MI]


      Suspects Arrested: 3
      Suspects Killed: 2


      Investigations Performed: no one


      Tickets Issued: 1 ticket with 99$
      Civilians Stopped: 1


      Description of your shift: First of all this is my first day in ARPD-LSPD, im logged in argonath to found Arthur connected, so i asked him in pm if i can be him Co-, he agreed, so we was patroling near LS International, Vinwood, LSPD, Temple, when suddenly we found a su (Jim_black), we pursuit him around ls to Dilimore, was killed by Arthur, because he was shooting a Helico, and failed to /gu,
      so after this we back to LS, we found another Su (Craft_Corleone), this one abuse so much that night, he was anoying but get tempbanned :D
      btw, arthur shoot him wheels, after im down because i was trying to get the car far away from him bike to dont blow up.
      im back after loosing memories, patrolling alone, i was rammed by some one named (Craft_corleone), i follow him when he fail to pull over after /m1 i su him for evading, so , i killed him after he begin shooting me .
      after going back to LSPD station, i found a Medic who bait a cop car, i sued him for copbaiting (showed in picture number 65), this is when admin tell me to dont su for this because this is what he want he was provoking, so i just ignore him, and i got PM from him --' but what we can do with those kids ? ,,
      so after when i was going out the station, another medic ramed me, but he didnt run , so i write him a ticket...
      when i was patroling a civilian was driving soo fast, i followed him with my Light emergency on, when he cross the LS-SF county road , i allumed my siren on, and /m1 him, but he failed to see my warning because he was soo speeding,, when i catched him, you have all the scenario in those 2 screen 71 and screen 72,
      this is was the end of my patrol for this day,
      hope u can understand my story :s but i fail because of my language i think
      this is why i taked alot of screen ^^



      Dash-Cam Pictures:
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-046.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-049.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-052.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-054.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-058.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-061.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-064.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-065.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-066.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-067.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-070.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-071.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-072.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/arpd/sa-mp-073.png




      Conclusion: Nothing

      • -- Notes -- a good start of my first day in ARPD
      • -- Questions --
      • -- Plans for improvements -- im trying to be good in my work, and be better in English

      [/list]
      Patrol Report


      Date: 25/05/2012

      Length: 3 hours


      Patrol Partner(s): Dark_Woozie, JackMosley,


      Suspects Arrested: 3
      Suspects Killed: 1


      Investigations Performed: 1 in LSPD office, 1 other at scene 


      Tickets Issued: 0
      Civilians Stopped: 1


      Description of your shift: My day start by finding a Su, I started toward the Su 10-20, due o my lag I am killed, after I got my uniform, my funs, the keys to my car patrole, I began a pursuit of a Su acoté of LSPD, this lawsuit is finished by the death of Su,
      I find myself near a weedspot, who abuses in Su / q patrole I was in, I saw a soudenly Su when my view, he / q again, I started to LS enroute to a fair stroll, a little after a Civilian temp has hit my car, speeding, I take him for investment, after  i jailed him , after that I ask're an officer to help me in my turn...
      after a bit of time we stopped a Civilian who was driving like a furious,, when we investigated him , i founded a dead body in the trank, this is when we know that he murder him GF for f**ing with some one other, and after we know too that is not him first murder, this is when i asked him to hands up , cuffed him, taked to LSPD for jailing him... (/su for killing him GF - with him acceptation)
      and this is all my action for this day :D lovely day with this Criminal who killed him gf , Nice Rp'ing :)



      Dash-Cam Pictures:

      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-040.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-041.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-048-1.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-052.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-058.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-064-1.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-065-2.png (here we was waiting for the su to come back after abusing /q alot of time
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-070-1.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-071-1.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-072.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-073-1.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-075.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-085.png
      http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/sa-mp-088.png

      Conclusion: nothing ^^

      • -- Notes --  awesome day but im angry because of those su who /q :@
      • -- Questions -- why we have some su just begin to shoot and run ? why to do not roleplay ?
      • -- Plans for improvements -- trying to be best in English more, trying to have more chance to patrole with a high ranker

      Offline FaKtorS

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      Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
      « Reply #10 on: May 27, 2012, 14:18:03 pm »
      Recommended, because he aswell do his yob and try learn someting new.

      GOod Luck buddy

      Offline Zing

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      Re: SAPD Application | Zing_Rivosecchi
      « Reply #11 on: May 29, 2012, 18:08:26 pm »
      Patrol Report


      Date: 27-28/05/2012

      Length: 12 Hours


      Patrol Partner(s): Arthur_K[MI]


      Suspects Arrested: +35(I did not count after the 30th)
      Suspects Killed: 15


      Investigations Performed: 4


      Tickets Issued: 1
      Civilians Stopped: 6


      Description of your shift: Busy day, Lot of Criminals, i patroled 5 time with different agents, i did patrol stop wrong romper, that was 2 nice day, lot of fun, doing Sniper work with the Helico team, trying my best to catch su, killing if resist,
      teaching new player in server, after he copbaiting me when /gu and cuffed,
      the patrol team that i was in, we catched a civilian who rob some one (all in screen),
      a lot of c30 in some area like Queens, SF, and the Bank of argo ,near LSPD ( big robbery ) but we killed all Su, and one of them (TAB) to dent be killed , and /q after we down our gun ...
      i got cop ban for killing a su, i was abused in this
      why copban for 2 hours ? when all cops was shooting this su ?? because he is ur freind ?
      anyway, nothing wrong by me,   



      Dash-Cam Pictures:

      35 Pictures, hard to put here, ill give u the link to my album ;)

      http://s228.photobucket.com/albums/ee36/hamzawalker/ARPD2/

      Conclusion: (place conclusion here)

      • MOD in argo should be re changed
      • When i shoot Su because i see others officers (lot) shooting him and try to spry him , i get ban cop if i shoot him too ? ( no warning was in my screen to dotn shoot him or any f* thing
      • -- Plans for improvements --

      Offline Daniel_Bradford

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      Re: SAPD Application | Zing
      « Reply #12 on: June 04, 2012, 23:52:32 pm »





      Inactivity Notice!


      Dear Applicant,

      We are here to inform you about your inactivity. Please read this and take it into consideration.
      Becoming an SAPD Officer, requires lots of work and dedication.
      This starts out with posting patrol reports, which you have not displayed.
      As it is your seventh day of Inactivity, you have three days left to improve.
      You may withdraw your application if you feel that it is necessary.
      If not, please continue posting patrol reports and checking the forums daily to receive a second chance.

      Notes: Regarding your question in your previous report, try to analyze the situation before to do like others do. It is not because they shoot at someone they are right. You might have arrived late and not seen the warnings, who knows.
      Anyway, wake up and post some patrol reports if you still want to see this application in this board.


      Signed,


      D. Bradford
      SAPD Academy Management

      Offline Daniel_Bradford

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      Re: [INCT] SAPD Application | Zing
      « Reply #13 on: June 06, 2012, 20:43:51 pm »





      Application Rejected!


      Hello Applicant,

      I regret to inform you that unfortunately your application has been
      rejected.
      A rejection can have several reasons, the following reason(s) apply to your rejection:

      - Did not wake up on time, inactive.


      IMPORTANT: If you do not agree with your rejection and you want to appeal for this, please send a PM towards

      Academy Command:
      Academy Chief Nexxt
      Academy Chief Kenny


      Signed,


      Daniel Bradford
      SAPD Academy Management

       

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