[REJECTED] A.C.S.D Application || Ryder Jones

[Ryder]

RP Information

First/Last name: Ryder Jones

Age: 23

County of residence: Mullholand, Los Santos

Phone number: 116065

Background story:
Prologue
I was born in a ranch back in Liberty City in a big family, I had 3 brothers and a sister,
my father was a farmer, mother was a home staying wife, she took care of the house and of us.
When I cried out to the world t was a cold winter day in Liberty, it was snowing like hell 
as described by my father, our old Golf's windshield was freezing and my father drove my mom
and all brothers and sisters plus my uncle to the hospital. I don't remember much because 
y'all know.. I was an infant, but I know my uncle John was a local sheriff, he also named me,
Ryder. He said that the name described power to him, and what I will become. My brothers were farmers
well one of them was a firefighter and worked at our local fire station. My father and mother married
so they had two last names but I had to decide which one to take after a tragic event later in life,
let's just continue with the story shall we?
Early Childhood
Like every other boy I liked to do stupid things like ride our horse when I was 3, needless to say 
I fell off and broke my hand, that was my first trip to a hospital, I had to be nervous because
I remember the smell, the smell of old beer and medication alcohol, I was alright but I remember
the doctor. He was brown haired gentleman with a stethoscope that had the iron things gold plated.
After he checked up on me ad fixed my hand he exited, he looked like a super hero to me, his coat
was like a cape, so I asked my father what he was, he told me "The chief of medicine" I of course
was too young to understand what that meant so I just noded. That is when I fell in love with being a doctor
just the thought of helping people was exciting to me.
Teenage years.
So I went to school, everything was fine I was a decent student, but it was the "what do you want to be
in life" question that seemed to make nobody wonder about it but made my brain collapse, what did I want to be?
A doctor, well until it was bring your father to work day, but of course my father was a busy man
so I brought my uncle with me. He told the class that he saves good people and continued talking
but in my mind I wondered if that is what I want to do in life, I mean I remember the doctor
but.. being a sheriff.. that sounds so much more exciting than the regular doctor, doesn't it?
The Decision.
Well it is time to pick your next school, the job you will be having FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE picking time,
well isn't that just a pleasant surprise that wakes you up in the morning, but I asked my father
if I could be both, he told me I can make a medical license and be okay, so I picked the academy, I finished
my police training started working as an officer in Liberty City.
The Weak Spot
So after the 5 years at the academy I return home seeing how nobody is at our old house, I call my father
he told me him and my mother broke up after twenty years of marriage, just threw it all away, my father
became a office worker and my  brothers just started doing whatever, one found work in the bank, one 
at KFC, my sister was a nurse at our local hospital. So I had to pick what last name I will have..
Smith or Jones.. Dad or Mom, who helped me the most, it wasn't as simple as "what last name do you want"
it was more like, who do you want to remember and who to forget.. I picked Jones, my mothers name because
the uncle was from her side and I loved my uncle.
Sticks and stones may break my bones but bullets kill my family.
So I was patrolling the city when I got a radio transmitting "207 C3, at least 16 civilians involved" I 
responded "where" ... "Bank" the thoughts that went through my head "NOOOO! MY BROTHER!" and the
"stay calm or they will win" I had enough thoughts to beat Einstein at an IQ test, so I went to the 
bank. I waited for more units to arrive but only a few other officers did, no SWAT, no FBI, no nothing
my brother was in there dying so I went in guns blazing, I ran towards the front door, shot the glass door
open, jumped through and screamed "WHERE IS MY BROTHER" and heard a loud bang next to me, and another one
everything went blurry, I looked to my right and saw my brother, he had .. clear eyes.. like he was blind,
when I saw blood dripping from the left side of his head, NO how could I let this happen!
But.. the second bang.. I looked down and saw blood dripping on the floor, but thank god my sanity
went away with my brothers life, I looked at the criminal with the angriest face I have ever had, he shot
me again, I shot him three times, all three times into the hearth  he looked at me with defeat and regret, 
and blood in his eyes. I was taken to the hospital but two FBI agents came to my room, an
afro american and an white male sat next to me and told me that I was unconscious but that I killed a man
from the famous Corleone mafia that ruled the streets of Liberty, they told me that they will hide my
identity and will send me on the first flight to San Andreas, which they did, but they sent my firefighter
brother and my uncle with me.
The Almost Present Day
I came to SA as a nobody, I met some nice people and just one man that I could tell all my secrets to, I won't
reveal his name as that would be highly unprofessional. I joined the local force where my patrol partner was a 
part time cop and actually a member of a mafia called Sforza. One day we responded to a C Purple in Blackfield
we went there and he told me to stick close to him and Sforza won't hurt us, as we approached we got fired upon
, I jumped out of the car, but he.. he wasn't behind me.. what could happen to him? But no bloody time to investigate,
I heard M4 bullets hinting the concrete behind me, I jumped into the water and hid there. 
The Present
I am here to serve and protect, I am here as a robot, the amount of times I got hurt in my life is unbelievable
and that is why it's hard to get close to someone when you know they might die any second of the day, I am
here to make good experienced friends that can take me under their wing. That can show me.. how.. what Teamwork is.
If For yesterday is but a dream
And tomorrow is only a vision
But today well lived makes every yesterday a dream of happiness. Why does yesterday hurt. I am here to look 
towards the future, and forget the past, I'm here to ask you if I can be one of you.

Non-RP information

IG name: Ryder_Jones

Age: 15

Do you have passport/driving license: Yes

How long have you been playing Argonath: since 24.January, so almost 4 months

Previous experience within law enforcment: N/A

Are you capable to use TeamSpeak: Yes

Why do you wish to join ACSD:
Because I got tired of living life as a criminal and I want to move on with my life, since I love the counties and I love the thought of being a sheriff I want to join ACSD.

[Chris Knight]

What is your previous names Ryder?

[Ryder]

What is your previous names Ryder?

Can that be private, so I PM it to you or do I need to write it here?

[Chris Knight]

You got 24 hours give me a proper reason why you created new account or you'll get denied.

[Chris Knight]

Denied.