S.A.P.D Application | Taylor. [APPROVED]

[Taylor|]

Application

Roleplay Details

Name:Taylor

Age:21

Country of residence:Los Santos

Are you legal citizen of Argonath[Do you have passport?]:yes i have

Do you have a driving license:yes i have

Biography:
Taylor was born in Los Santos in 1987 his parents were happy because it was the only but after a time father learns that is sick with cancer and died, his mother mourning her husband fell ill and died Taylor their 17 years of losing parents and he had what's to do to survive, he was employed to distribute newspapers from house to house until his adulthood then employed as a firefighter after a while loses job and starts to study at the police academy Taylor has been accepted by the Chief Drih police station in dillermore after some time he is moved between Los Santos police station after a few months he is moved to the police station in Las Venturas because many criminal groups moved into the city, Tajor in 2002 in action in Las Venturas house mafia Soprano was wounded and in hospital in Las Venturas Doctor Hevar 'saves livesthen Taylor gets a medal for bravery and he continues to serve in the police station in Las Venturas

Non-RP Details

IG name:Taylor.

Age IRL:14

Playing in server since:27 of February,2013

Playing as cop in server since: 2 months ..

Any recent punishments related to your police job:no i no get anyone punishments.

Are you able to use TS/Microphone: i have TS3 but  my microphone no work 

Why do you want join:i want join becuase . i think i'm good cop ,I collaborate with most of Police Department Member's



Signed by, Taylor
   

[[WS]Mike]

Lots of mistakes. For one, don't approve your application, and two, correct the many mistakes in your main post.

[Taylor|]

Lots of mistakes. For one, don't approve your application, and two, correct the many mistakes in your main post.

I Fixed it
..

[Hamza]

Lots of mistakes. For one, don't approve your application, and two, correct the many mistakes in your main post.

I Fixed it
..

Still not fixed.
Being straight forward, please:
- Add questions in bold and answers in normal fonts
- Remove 'my work' section.

[Taylor|]

Lots of mistakes. For one, don't approve your application, and two, correct the many mistakes in your main post.

I Fixed it
..

Still not fixed.
Being straight forward, please:
- Add questions in bold and answers in normal fonts
- Remove 'my work' section.

Hamza Thanks you Soo much to you show my bugs.. i hope i fix it ..all

[[R*]Drix]

Looks good now, your a great funny and friendly guy, i hope you learn allot and become a great officer ! 

[Hamza]

Greetings Taylor You have applied for San Andreas Police Department(SA:MP). Your application is hereby noted and under review by S.A.P.D.'s Academy Command. While you are waiting for an answer from the SAPD Academy Command, you should show your activity and dedication by making patrol reports. Notice: If your application is seen inactive for over 7 days, while your application is not noted in inactivity status, you will be denied for lack of interest. Signed by, John 'Hamza' Nolan S.A.P.D. Command

[Taylor|]

Looks good now, your a great funny and friendly guy, i hope you learn allot and become a great officer ! 

Thanks you Drix  i hope i will become a great officer !

     

Greetings Taylor You have applied for San Andreas Police Department(SA:MP). Your application is hereby noted and under review by S.A.P.D.'s Academy Command. While you are waiting for an answer from the SAPD Academy Command, you should show your activity and dedication by making patrol reports. Notice: If your application is seen inactive for over 7 days, while your application is not noted in inactivity status, you will be denied for lack of interest. Signed by, John 'Hamza' Nolan S.A.P.D. Command

  Thanks you hamza i every day i will put patrol report's

[Taylor|]

Date:
3/31/2013

Patrol Length:
2 hour

Patrol Partner:
Adrian_McCoy

Suspect Arrested:
1

Suspect Killed:
1

Dash-Cam Pictures:
http://imgur.com/7hB3Y3v,bqTIfQf,fA1rDbr,BAL3Brc,MWwfu25,14xJz6K

[Taylor|]

Date:
4/1/2013

Patrol Length:
1 hour

Patrol Partner:
none
Pedres_Rosso
Suspect Arrested:


Suspect Killed:
3

Dash-Cam Pictures: http://imgur.com/9ha7b9d,0T8MW40,kzB17D5,8FIk6zK#0

[Hamza]

A more description in your patrol report will be good as we can see which incidents took place in your patrol briefly.

[Taylor|]

A more description in your patrol report will be good as we can see which incidents took place in your patrol briefly.

i will do it
Date:
4/1/2013

Patrol Length:
1 hour

Patrol Partner:
[MCO]Dzon_Dawson
Clone
Chris_Rosso
Suspect Arrested:
2


Suspect Killed:
2

Dash-Cam Pictures:http://imgur.com/hUUjjU0,5d8r4Ub,J4Ln13x,O5QP6L7,YfBqGEq,RJ384jD,zHEec61,TG6zzZL
incident: none.

[Taylor|]

i will do it
Date:
4/5/2013

Patrol Length:
1 hour

Patrol Partner:

Suspect Arrested:
1


Suspect Killed:
2

Dash-Cam Pictures:http://imgur.com/08v5YVU,Ffwbm9F,A3hviaE,twcCM6v#0
incident: .. Cop on duty drunked..

[Hamza]

Are you still interested? 48 hours to reply..

[Hamza]

Greetings Taylor With regards, we are hereby informing you that your application is denied. The reasons for your denial are: - Lost interest Note: - You may re-apply after 1 week. Signed by, TeaM-Hamza S.A.P.D. Command