[Rejected] N.O.O.S.E Application- KosmicHQ

[KosmicHQ]

National Office of Security Enforcement

Application of: <Roleplay Name>

1. Your current in-game name:
(KosmicHQ)

2. Your previous in-game names:
(KosmicHQ)

3. Your role play name:
(KosmicHQ)

4. Your Argonath RPG forum profile:
(http://www.argonathrpg.eu/index.php?action=profile)

5. Your Skype username (required!):
(KosmicHQ)

6. Date of registration in Argonath RPG and IV:MP:
(November 03, 2017)

7. Do you possess Liberty City passport and driving license?
(Yes)


8. Have you ever been banned from any Argonath RPG server? If yes, provide link to your unban request(s):
(No)

9. List all your administrative punishments in the last 30 days:
(NONE)


10. Are you or have you ever been a member of the LCPD or FBI?
(No)

10.1. If you are, what is your current rank?
(Current rank is Cadet)

10.2. If you were, what made you leave the organisation and what was your rank?
(I didnt leave)


11. Are you or have you ever been a member of any player group in Argonath?
(No)

11.1. If you are, what is the group?


11.2. If you were, what made you leave the group?


12. List all player groups you've been apart of in Argonath::
(None)


13. Why do you want to join the National Office of Security Enforcement?
(So i can help People and so i can catch all criminals under cover. I love to help others and i am always on the Right side )

14. Which N.O.O.S.E. sub-division are you interested in?
(CIU)

15. Depending on your answer to Q14, explain why do you want to join that sub-division and why you should be accepted into it:
(Coz i want to help other Officers and i luv to help others )


16. Explain what team work means to you and why is it important:
(Team work means to help each other out. It is important because it helps to improve friendship between us)

I, (KosmicHQ), certify that all information in this application are true and complete.

Signed,
(KosmicHQ)

[DwaYR]

Greetings, Kosmic.

Well, how to begin with you, your application doesnt look good, here are the points you should fix, in order to get atleast noted.

Click on the "Modify" on the post in the top right of the post and..

• Edit the name of the topic to "N.O.O.S.E. Application - YOUR RP NAME" <- please do not write "yourrpname" there, but create your roleplay name you want like Kosmic Novak or Michael Jackson instead(these are just examples).
• Remove the brackets from your application, so the answer should be "10. Are you or have you ever been a member of the LCPD or FBI?
  Yes LCPD", not "(Yes, LCPD)
• Click on "Preview" and fill all the unanswered questions or unanswered brackets, please. This is very important, as you haven´t filled most of the answers.
• Q.10 - you are not a part of LCPD, please fix this.
• Q.4 - go to argonathrpg.eu, look at the left side of the forum and scroll down a little until you see "Who´s online", then click on your name there, it should redirect you to your profile and copy the URL here.
• Q.13 - are you joining only because you want a better rank? We do not accept people like these, please state other reason.
• REWORK YOUR WHOLE APPLICATION, AS IT IS TERRIBLE.

Signed,
NOOSE TRU Lieutenant
Dway A.R.

[Steven S.]

Do what mentioned above, please.

[Steven S.]

National Office of Security Enforcement Greetings, KosmicHQ Your application for the National Office of Security Enforcement has been rejected. Unfortunately, the National Office of Security Enforcement has decided to reject your application for our organisation. Refer to the information below to learn further details: Failure to fix the points within the given time. Unsuitable and too new for the division.                   Please file another application after: 10/1/2018. Signed by, N.O.O.S.E. CIU Inspector 28/12/2017