[SAPD Application] Joefinn [Rejected]

[JoeFinn]

No intersted at af

[Jake Parker]

Mr. Hesham,

I would like to begin by stating that the Recruitment Unit of the San Andreas Police Department feels thankful for your interest in joining the Department. Unfortunately, there seems to be a few inaccuracies resulting in the application being placed on PENDING status for the reason(s) below.

• Fix the "signed" part do not mention officials
• Modify point 14, doesnt has to be within a spoiler.
• Your phone number should be your in-game phone number

You have a maximum of forty-eight (48) hours to address the above. Please reply back once you have done so.

Notes: N/A.

Jake Parker
Sergeant
Recruitment Unit
Administrative Services Bureau
San Andreas Police Department

[JoeFinn]

Greetings,
Evreything Fixed now,Sorry for that mistake

[Gregory Parker]

Add a screenshot of your /groups in the spoiler of question 18. It is required.
Fix the signature of yours. It contains something which isn't supposed to be there. Read over it and you'll understand what's wrong.

[JoeFinn]

Dunno.

[Jake Parker]

Have a look at someone else his signature then have a better look at yours.

[JoeFinn]

done and fixed it

[Jake Parker]

The screenshot should be put in  and I don't know what you changed but it's still the same though 

[Gregory Parker]

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LIEUTENANT LIONEL VALDES
ADMINISTRATIVE SERVICES BUREAU

This is what is wrong in your signature. Please remove it and fix it.

You also need to change your application's title to "[tag] firstname_lastname"

[Jake Parker]

Mr. Hesham,

I would like to begin by stating that the Recruitment Unit of the San Andreas Police Department feels thankful for your interest in joining the Department. Unfortunately, it has been decided that your application does not meet the requirements for acceptance. Subsequently, your application is DENIED for the reason(s) below.

• Lack of motivation to proceed the application

Please ensure that you meet the minimum requirements in order to advance beyond the Applicant Stage. You may re-apply next wave once you feel all criteria are fulfilled.

Notes: N/A.

Jake Parker
Sergeant
Recruitment Unit
Administrative Services Bureau
San Andreas Police Department