ARPD Signature for ME :D

[[AV]Natan]

Yep i make this sexy Sign. :]

[Aryin James]

eh....kinda looks like you only added the ARPD part........Next time find a picture WITHOUT the copyright info on it

[[AV]Natan]

what do you mean ?

[Frederick]

what do you mean ?

I believe he's talking about "SDesign" at the bottom right.

[[AV]Natan]

SDesign its me XD

[Kiryan]

Ah, ah! If you are the owner of this picture, gratz, nice work! 

[[AV]Natan]

Yes i am the owner :]
and thnx
i can show you another my works

[Frederick]

Okay, just a few pointers on this.

It lacks a focal point, that is somewhere the viewer's eye should focus on.  That is due to several reasons, which includes - and also drags me on to something else I wanted to point out - lighting.  The work has no real form of lighting in it, which is one reason there is no focal point.  Each render added into the work has it's own lighting, which does not work well, as it ends up in too many light sources.

Something else I'd like to point out is composition.  The layout of the renders is pretty well executed, however, it's too congested.  There are way too many things attracting your attention at once, and some depth would help in resolving that issue alongside an actual light source.

Another thing I'd like to point out is that the text does not match the image.  It blends in a bit too much in my opinion, and the style does not fit.  I suggest messing around with the colour of the text.  Also, try messing around with the colour of the entire image to get something a bit different, instead of just a gloomy blue.

Also, a signature is generally supposed to be not more than 100 - 200 pixels in height.  Thus, this signature is a bit too large.  I personally find having a signature which is most of the times larger than your post itself to look "unprofessional" so to speak.

Lastly, next time save your image as a ".png" instead of ".jpg" as JPEG images are just like ".rar" and ".zip" in the sense that it's compressed.  And the white definately does not go with the image.  Delete the background in whatever graphics program you're using, and save it as a ".png".
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The above is pretty much the basic stuff I wanted to point out.  Despite the fact I criticised quite a bit of the work done on this image, I will have you know that it's not half-bad.  It's pretty good, but not the best so to speak.  Keep working at it, and you'll get better and better.  

[[AV]Natan]

Man However .... you wright there an Story XD
but thnx for replying, my pluserre
somthing also ??? 

[Jordan]

Really needs a transparent background instead of a big block of white which just is an eye sore, but overall it's good.

[Kiryan]

Yeah, with a trasparent background the picture will be more sexy.
And... Yeah, post some your works, you are good.

[MrTrane]

I removed the background for you
http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8927/natan.gif

[[AV]Natan]

Thnx but it looks Ugly :S
thnx more time :]